图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác, ví dụ như 'refer to read ebooks' và 'to going to go'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually read ebooks at home. I don't have much free time, and there isn't a convenient library near my house.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'finding' thay vì 'find'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và sử dụng thì phù hợp. Hãy tránh lặp lại và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: When I was a kid, I used to go to the library to study and find resources for my research.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ) và tránh lặp từ như 'I like to I like to'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, when I was a kid, I liked to go to the library because it had many resources and was a quiet place to study.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ 'a Chinese kid often to go' và câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi về số nhiều, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because public libraries are very popular in China. They have many resources, and parents also encourage their children to visit them.

× I refer to read ebooks at home because I don't have much free time to going to go to the library and there wasn't a convenient library near my home.

✓ I prefer to read ebooks at home because I don't have much free time to go to the library and there isn't a convenient library near my home.

The phrase 'refer to read' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer to read'. Also, after 'to' (a preposition or infinitive marker), the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'to going to go' should be corrected to 'to go'. Additionally, 'wasn't' should be 'isn't' to match the present context.

× When I was a kid, I. I used to I go, I went to the library to study and finding resources to research and study.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to go to the library to study and find resources to research and study.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect verb forms. 'Used to' should be followed by the base verb 'go'. Also, 'finding' should be 'find' to maintain parallel structure with 'to study'. The extra 'I' and 'I went' are unnecessary and incorrect here.

× When I was a kid, I like to I like to go to the library because I can find many resources and there is there was also a quiet place to study.

✓ When I was a kid, I liked to go to the library because I could find many resources and there was also a quiet place to study.

Since the sentence refers to the past ('When I was a kid'), the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Like' should be 'liked', 'can' should be 'could', and 'is' should be 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I think a Chinese kid often to go to the library because the public libraries are so popular in China and they also have many resources and the parent also want to take their.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because public libraries are very popular in China and they also have many resources, and parents also want to take their children there.

The phrase 'a Chinese kid often to go' is incorrect; it should be plural 'Chinese kids often go'. 'Parent' should be plural 'parents' to agree with 'they'. The sentence was incomplete and needed clarification for 'take their' to 'take their children there'.