图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'peaceful' and ensure correct sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I often visit the library because it provides a peaceful environment where I can concentrate better than at home. Additionally, the library offers access to many useful research materials such as books.'

範例: Yes, I often visit the library because it provides a peaceful environment where I can concentrate better than at home. Additionally, the library offers access to many useful research materials such as books.

建議: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes and grammatical errors. Try to use correct words like 'search' instead of 'source' and 'book' instead of 'boot'. Also, use linking words like 'then' or 'after that' to make your answer coherent. For example, 'First, I usually search for the book I need in the library. After finding it, I study there because the environment is quiet and comfortable. The library helps me focus without distractions.'

範例: First, I usually search for the book I need in the library. After finding it, I study there because the environment is quiet and comfortable. The library helps me focus without distractions.

建議: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating words like 'the'. Also, use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' properly. For example, 'Yes, I often visited the library when I was a kid because it was my favorite place. I especially enjoyed reading fantastic stories that sparked my imagination. Also, the library was always very quiet, so it was the perfect place to do homework and study.'

範例: Yes, I often visited the library when I was a kid because it was my favorite place. I especially enjoyed reading fantastic stories that sparked my imagination. Also, the library was always very quiet, so it was the perfect place to do homework and study.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'visit live'. Try to clarify your points and use linking words like 'however' and 'for example'. For instance, 'I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Nepal, it depends on the school they attend. For example, children in government schools do not visit the library often; however, in private schools, it is compulsory to attend the library once a day.'

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Nepal, it depends on the school they attend. For example, children in government schools do not visit the library often; however, in private schools, it is compulsory to attend the library once a day.

× Yes, I often visit libraries for my study purpose.

✓ Yes, I often visit libraries for my study purposes.

The word 'purpose' should be plural 'purposes' because it refers to multiple reasons or aims for studying, which is common in this context.

× It is one of my favorite place to visit because it is quite peaceful and peaceful environment which I speak to concentrate even better than my home.

✓ It is one of my favorite places to visit because it has a quite peaceful environment which helps me concentrate even better than at my home.

'Place' should be plural 'places' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, 'peaceful and peaceful environment' is redundant; 'a quite peaceful environment' is clearer. 'I speak to concentrate' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me concentrate'. 'Than my home' needs 'at' for correct preposition usage.

× Additional library offer sex access to many resourceful researches such as book.

✓ Additionally, the library offers easy access to many resourceful resources such as books.

'Additional' should be 'Additionally' to function as an adverb. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Offer' should be 'offers' for subject-verb agreement. 'Sex access' is a typo for 'easy access'. 'Researches' is incorrect; 'resources' or 'research materials' is better. 'Book' should be plural 'books'.

× First of all, I usually source for the boot that I need in the library.

✓ First of all, I usually search for the book that I need in the library.

'Source for' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'search for'. 'Boot' is a typo for 'book'.

× After after finding it, I stored it here because the environment is very quiet and comfortable.

✓ After finding it, I study here because the environment is very quiet and comfortable.

The phrase 'After after' is a repetition error. 'Stored it here' is incorrect; the student likely means they study there. Since the question is about usual activities, present tense 'study' fits better than past tense 'stored'.

× The library is one of my favorite place to study since it's allowed me to focus without any distractions.

✓ The library is one of my favorite places to study since it allows me to focus without any distractions.

'Place' should be plural 'places' after 'one of'. 'It's allowed me' is incorrect; it should be 'it allows me' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I often visit library when I was a kid because it was my favorite place to be.

✓ Yes, I often visited the library when I was a kid because it was my favorite place to be.

'Visit' should be past tense 'visited' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I especially enjoyed reading fantastic stories which sparked my imaginations.

✓ I especially enjoyed reading fantastic stories which sparked my imagination.

'Imaginations' should be singular 'imagination' because it refers to the faculty of imagining, which is uncountable.

× Besides the the library was always very quiet, so it was perfect place for me to do homework as well as study the library books.

✓ Besides, the library was always very quiet, so it was the perfect place for me to do homework as well as study the library books.

Repeated 'the the' is a typo. 'Perfect place' needs the definite article 'the perfect place'.

× I'm not sure about the Chinese kids, but while in Nepal it depends upon which school they attend.

✓ I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Nepal, it depends on which school they attend.

'The Chinese kids' is better as 'Chinese kids' without 'the' for generalization. 'While in Nepal' is better as 'in Nepal'. 'Depends upon' is acceptable but 'depends on' is more common.

× For example, children in government school don't go, don't have to visit live very often, while in private school it is compulsory for the student to attend the library once a day.

✓ For example, children in government schools don't have to visit the library very often, while in private schools it is compulsory for students to attend the library once a day.

'Government school' and 'private school' should be plural 'government schools' and 'private schools' to generalize. 'Don't go, don't have to visit live' is incorrect; it should be 'don't have to visit the library'. 'The student' should be plural 'students'.