图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "quite place" instead of "a quiet place." Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly to connect your ideas naturally.

範例: Yes, I usually go to the library on weekends because I find it a quiet place to study. However, recently I have been going less often since many digital books are available online, making it easier to access information from home.

建議: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clearer linking. For example, say "I usually read books in the library" and use linking words like "because" to explain reasons. Also, avoid vague phrases like "more related to my culture"; instead, be specific.

範例: I usually read books in the library because I enjoy history books related to my culture. I prefer reading these there since many of them are not available on the Internet.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct past tense forms and clearer sentence structures. For example, say "I did not often go to the library" and "the libraries were far from my home." Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words like "because" and "so."

範例: No, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because the libraries were far from my home, and I was not allowed to go alone. So, I only started going when I was about 15 years old.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words. For example, say "I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, but I read that..." Also, avoid awkward phrases like "has get encouraged."

範例: Well, I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, but I read in a newspaper that many Chinese children are encouraged by their parents to visit libraries, and there are special courses designed for them to do so.

× I usually go to the library on weekends because I find it quite place to study.

✓ I usually go to the library on weekends because I find it quite a good place to study.

The sentence is missing an article and an adjective before 'place'. 'Quite' is an adverb and needs to modify an adjective. Adding 'a good' makes the phrase grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I usually read books in library.

✓ I usually read books in the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I like books of history more related to my culture.

✓ I like books on history that are more related to my culture.

The phrase 'books of history more related to my culture' is awkward. Using 'books on history' and adding 'that are' clarifies the meaning and corrects the adjective usage.

× That's why I prefer reading that type of books on library which are not mostly available on Internet.

✓ That's why I prefer reading that type of books in the library which are not mostly available on the Internet.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect before 'library'; it should be 'in the library'. Also, 'on Internet' should be 'on the Internet' because 'Internet' requires the definite article.

× No, I was not often go to the library when I was a kid because libraries much far away from my home and I was not allowed to go alone to the library.

✓ No, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because libraries were much far away from my home and I was not allowed to go alone to the library.

The phrase 'was not often go' is incorrect; the correct past tense negative form is 'did not often go'. Also, 'libraries much far away' lacks the verb 'were' to complete the sentence.

× So that's why I would went to library when I became 15 or more than that.

✓ So that's why I went to the library when I became 15 or older.

'Would went' is incorrect; 'would' is modal and should be followed by base verb 'go' or simply use past tense 'went'. Also, 'to library' needs the article 'the'. 'More than that' is better expressed as 'older'.

× Well as I am not much aware from the Chinese culture but once I read in the newspaper that most of the Chinese kids has get encouraged from their parents to go to the library and they have a special course designed for their kids to visit them.

✓ Well, as I am not very aware of Chinese culture, but once I read in the newspaper that most Chinese kids are encouraged by their parents to go to the library and they have a special course designed for their kids to visit it.

The phrase 'aware from' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'aware of'. 'Has get encouraged' is grammatically wrong; it should be 'are encouraged'. Also, 'designed for their kids to visit them' is unclear; 'visit it' refers to the library properly.

× most of the Chinese kids has get encouraged from their parents to go to the library

✓ most of the Chinese kids are encouraged by their parents to go to the library

The subject 'kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'has'. Also, 'has get' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'are encouraged'.