图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use correct verb forms and articles. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library to study and do my homework."

範例: Yes, I often go to the library to study and do my homework because it is a quiet place that helps me concentrate.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Use correct verb tenses and add linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "I usually do my homework and research information in books because it helps me understand my subjects better."

範例: I usually do my homework and research information in books because it helps me understand my subjects better.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Use a clear topic sentence and provide specific details. Avoid filler sounds like "MMM". For example, "Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library to read and sometimes buy comic books."

範例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library to read and sometimes buy comic books because I enjoyed the stories.

建議: Your answer does not directly address the question and contains unclear phrases. Try to answer honestly but clearly, and explain your perspective. For example, "I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I live in Vietnam and don't have much experience with that."

範例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I live in Vietnam and don't have much experience with that.

× Either way, going to library for study and doing my homework in my school.

✓ Either way, I go to the library to study and do my homework at my school.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'going' and 'doing' without auxiliary verbs, which is not grammatically correct in this context. The sentence requires the simple present tense to describe habitual actions, so 'I go' and 'do' are appropriate. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the', and 'at my school' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× When I go to the library, I always doing homework and research the information in the book in library.

✓ When I go to the library, I always do homework and research information in the books in the library.

The phrase 'I always doing' is incorrect; it should be 'I always do' to match the simple present tense for habitual actions. Also, 'research' is used as a verb here and should be followed by the object without 'the' unless specific information is meant. 'In the books in the library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library' and plural 'books' to be natural.

× When I school kids I always going to the library to read the comedies and as I always MMM, buy the comedy.

✓ When I was a school kid, I always went to the library to read comedies and I also always bought comedies.

The original sentence lacks the past tense auxiliary 'was' and uses 'going' instead of the past tense 'went'. 'As I always MMM' is unclear and replaced with 'I also always'. 'Comedy' should be plural 'comedies' to refer to multiple books. The sentence needs past tense verbs to match the time frame.

× I don't know, Chinese kid often goes to delivery because I'm Vietnamese and I live in Vietnam.

✓ I don't know, Chinese kids often go to the library because I'm Vietnamese and I live in Vietnam.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the plural verb 'often go'. 'Delivery' is incorrect in this context and should be 'library'. The verb 'goes' changes to 'go' to agree with the plural subject 'kids'.