图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, then adding specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Also, pay attention to grammar and article usage, for example, say 'the library' instead of 'library'.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment which helps me concentrate. Moreover, there are many encyclopedias and resources that support my higher studies research.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and is incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly by stating what you do first, then explaining why. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, complete your sentences fully.

範例: In the library, I usually follow a study schedule because it helps me focus on one topic deeply. This method is very effective for my learning.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with specific details. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete. For example, explain your childhood habits clearly and finish your thoughts.

範例: When I was a kid, I did not often go to the library because I preferred playing with my friends and watching TV. Instead, my parents taught me whenever I needed to learn something.

建議: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and complete sentences. If you don't know, you can say so briefly and then give a general opinion with reasons, using linking words for coherence.

範例: I am not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but generally, many students prefer studying online using computers and mobile apps because it is more convenient and affordable than going to libraries.

× Yes, I usually go to library because it gives a wider knowledge and there are lots of encyclopedias in library and whenever I need for research regarding my higher studies I prefer library because it give us a quiet environment which is suitable for me and it helps to concentrate and it is a cheaper.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library because it gives wider knowledge and there are lots of encyclopedias in the library and whenever I need research regarding my higher studies I prefer the library because it gives us a quiet environment which is suitable for me and it helps me to concentrate and it is cheaper.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'a wider knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. 'It give us' should be 'it gives us' to agree with the singular subject. 'It helps to concentrate' should be 'it helps me to concentrate' to specify the subject. 'It is a cheaper' is incorrect; 'cheaper' is a comparative adjective and needs a comparison or should be 'it is cheap'.

× To be honest, I set a schedule for library studies because I prefer a suitable study for a suitable day, and it is more convenient for me to choose a specific topic for studies, and I usually study about only in one topic deeply and it is very helpful for me and.

✓ To be honest, I set a schedule for library studies because I prefer suitable study on a suitable day, and it is more convenient for me to choose a specific topic for study, and I usually study only one topic deeply and it is very helpful for me.

The phrase 'study about only in one topic deeply' is awkward and incorrect. 'Study about' should be 'study' or 'study on'. 'Only in one topic' should be 'only one topic'. The sentence was also incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× To be honest, I I have lack interest in my childhood because in that on that time I usually prefer to play with my childhood friends and I usually watch TV programs sometime I whenever I need to learn something, I usually my parents usually teach me and after that when I when I'm in graduation, I.

✓ To be honest, I had a lack of interest in my childhood because at that time I usually preferred to play with my childhood friends and I usually watched TV programs. Sometimes whenever I needed to learn something, my parents usually taught me. After that, when I was in graduation, I...

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I have lack interest' should be 'I had a lack of interest' to indicate past. 'I usually prefer' should be 'I usually preferred' and 'I usually watch' should be 'I usually watched' to maintain past tense consistency. 'I usually my parents usually teach me' is incomplete and corrected to 'my parents usually taught me'. 'When I'm in graduation' should be 'when I was in graduation'.

× To be honest, I have no type of knowledge regarding the Chinese students, but generally people are people prefer study online via why via computers and the mobile applications and it is more convenient and easier because it is pocket friendly. Libraries is a such type of.

✓ To be honest, I have no knowledge regarding Chinese students, but generally people prefer to study online via computers and mobile applications and it is more convenient and easier because it is pocket friendly. Libraries are a different type of resource.

'No type of knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'no knowledge'. 'People are people prefer' is redundant; corrected to 'people prefer'. 'Study online via why via computers' is unclear and corrected to 'study online via computers'. 'Libraries is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'Libraries are'. The last sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.