图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法错误较多，时态使用不准确，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复词汇，并用更自然的表达方式回答问题。

範例: I don't go to the library often during summer vacation because I usually stay at home and play video games. However, during final exams, I visit the library every day to prepare.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，且句子结构较为简单。建议使用更准确的语法结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Usually, I study in the library. However, sometimes I get distracted when people nearby play games or make phone calls.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且细节描述不够具体。建议注意时态和单复数形式，丰富细节描述，使回答更具体。

範例: When I was a child, I rarely went to the library because I spent most of my time attending after-school classes, such as chess and piano lessons.

建議: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不连贯，逻辑关系不清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和连接词，表达更清楚有条理。

範例: When I was young, children didn't often go to the library. However, as society has developed, many parents are busy working and choose to send their children to the library for supervision and learning.

× But if like during the final exam time, I might went to the library every day to prepare the exam.

✓ But if like during the final exam time, I might go to the library every day to prepare for the exam.

这里使用了情态动词'might'，后面应该接动词原形，不能用过去式'went'。正确用法是'might go'。

× To be honest, staying in the library, I will just to study, even though sometimes I am distracted by other people, like if somebody near me, he or she play games or calling and I'm just distracted by them.

✓ To be honest, staying in the library, I will just study, even though sometimes I am distracted by other people, like if somebody near me plays games or is calling, and I'm just distracted by them.

动词后不需要加不定式to，应该直接用动词原形'study'。另外，第三人称单数主语he or she后动词应加s，'play'应改为'plays'。'calling'前应加助动词'is'，构成现在进行时。

× When I was a kid, I didn't have enough time to go to the library to read some comics, book or some novels because I need to spend most of the time to take the after school classes, like learn some chess or learn piano this kind.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't have enough time to go to the library to read some comics, books or some novels because I needed to spend most of the time taking after school classes, like learning chess or learning piano this kind.

前半句时态为过去时，后半句也应保持一致，'need'应改为过去式'needed'。'to take'后面应使用动名词'taking'，'learn'应改为'learning'，表示正在进行的动作。

× I think when I was young the kids didn't have time to went to the library, but with the society development, the kid now the kids parents often need to work, so they didn't have enough time to accompany with their child.

✓ I think when I was young the kids didn't have time to go to the library, but with the society development, the kids' parents often need to work, so they don't have enough time to accompany their child.

情态动词'didn't'后应接动词原形，'went'应改为'go'。'kid now the kids parents'语序混乱，应改为'the kids' parents'。'didn't have'改为现在时'don't have'以符合上下文。'accompany'后不加介词'with'。

× So they were decided to put their child to the library.

✓ So they decided to put their child in the library.

'were decided'被动语态用法错误，应改为主动语态'decided'。'put'后面搭配介词'in'表示放置在某处，而不是'to'。