图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answers clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and linking words. For example, instead of 'I would prefer me more convenient,' say 'because it is more convenient for me.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I find it more convenient to read books wherever I am. I can carry any book I want with me, so I prefer that.

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to organize your answer with clear structure and use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas. Use correct verb forms and be specific about what you do. For example, say 'I usually do research to complete my assignments and learn new things from theses and other materials related to my major.'

範例: When I go to the library, I usually do research to complete my assignments. I also read theses and other materials to learn new things and improve my knowledge in my major.

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct past tense and connect your ideas clearly. For example, say 'I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. Instead, I studied in a small group where we learned and played together.'

範例: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library. Instead, I studied in a small group where we learned and played together.

建議: In English (Cambodia), try to improve your grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'but' to contrast ideas. For example, say 'I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but Cambodian children usually do not go to the library. They prefer self-study or group study with friends or teachers.'

範例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but Cambodian children usually do not. They prefer to study by themselves or in groups with friends or teachers.

× I would prefer me more convenient.

✓ I would prefer it to be more convenient.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used here. The correct object pronoun referring to the situation is 'it'. The phrase should be 'I would prefer it to be more convenient' to express preference properly.

× I carry whatever I want and everywhere.

✓ I carry whatever I want everywhere.

The preposition 'and' is incorrectly used between 'want' and 'everywhere'. 'Everywhere' is an adverb modifying 'carry', so it should directly follow without 'and'.

× Once I go to the library, I always do a research which help me to complete my assignment and I find something new to learn, suggest from the thesis that Sydney wrote and other topic to improve my major.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I always do research that helps me complete my assignments, and I find something new to learn, suggested by the thesis that Sydney wrote and other topics to improve my major.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'Once I go' is better as 'Whenever I go' to express habitual action; 'do a research' should be 'do research' as 'research' is uncountable; 'which help' should be 'that helps' to agree with singular 'research'; 'complete my assignment' should be plural 'assignments' for generality; 'suggest from' should be 'suggested by'; 'other topic' should be plural 'other topics'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× When I was a kid, I I didn't go to the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library.

There is a repeated word 'I'. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× I just had a small group study which was there.

✓ I just had a small group study that was there.

Using 'which' for defining clauses referring to people or groups is less appropriate; 'that' is preferred for essential clauses.

× Everything we learned together and we play something fun together.

✓ We learned everything together and played something fun together.

The sentence mixes tenses and lacks parallel structure. Changing to past tense 'learned' and 'played' matches the context of past events.

× Cambodian children does not go to the library, they just have a self study or a group study with their friend or friend teacher to.

✓ Cambodian children do not go to the library; they just have self-study or group study with their friends or a friend teacher too.

'Children' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' not 'does'. 'Self study' should be 'self-study' as a compound noun. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'their'. 'Friend teacher' is unclear but kept as is; 'too' is the correct adverb instead of 'to'.