图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，简化句子结构，避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, when I was at university, I often went to the library to study or do my assignments because it was quiet and helped me concentrate.

建議: 回答内容较为具体，但句子连接不够流畅，重复使用“place”。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并丰富词汇。

範例: I usually read books or work on my urban planning assignments because there are many design tasks, so I need a quiet place to focus.

建議: 回答中时态混乱，且表达不够自然。建议统一时态，使用更地道的表达方式，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

範例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because it had many kinds of books. Sometimes, I borrowed books to read at home.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用完整句子，并注意主谓一致和词汇搭配。

範例: I don't think many children in China often go to the library nowadays because they prefer playing on computers or tablets. Few of them enjoy reading books, so they rarely visit the library.

× Yes, when I in the university, I usually went to a library to study or do my assignment because they are quiet and I can immerse in such a quiet atmosphere so that I can concentrate on my task.

✓ Yes, when I am in the university, I usually go to the library to study or do my assignments because it is quiet and I can immerse myself in such a quiet atmosphere so that I can concentrate on my tasks.

句子中描述的是现在的习惯动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。'I in the university'缺少动词，应为'I am in the university'。'a library'应改为特指的'the library'，因为通常指特定的图书馆。'do my assignment'应为复数'do my assignments'，因为通常有多个作业。'they are quiet'指代图书馆，应使用单数'it is quiet'。'immerse'后应加反身代词'myself'。

× Yes, when I in the university, I usually went to a library to study or do my assignment because they are quiet and I can immerse in such a quiet atmosphere so that I can concentrate on my task.

✓ Yes, when I was in the university, I usually went to the library to study or do my assignments because it was quiet and I could immerse myself in such a quiet atmosphere so that I could concentrate on my tasks.

如果句子想表达过去的习惯，应使用过去时态。'when I in the university'应为'when I was in the university'。'they are quiet'应改为过去时态'it was quiet'。'can'应改为过去时态'could'。

× Yes, when I in the university, I usually went to a library to study or do my assignment because they are quiet and I can immerse in such a quiet atmosphere so that I can concentrate on my task.

✓ Yes, when I was in the university, I usually went to the library to study or do my assignments because it was quiet and I could immerse myself in such a quiet atmosphere so that I could concentrate on my tasks.

'assignment'应为复数形式'assignments'，因为通常有多个作业。'task'也应为复数形式'tasks'，表示多个任务。

× Yes, when I in the university, I usually went to a library to study or do my assignment because they are quiet and I can immerse in such a quiet atmosphere so that I can concentrate on my task.

✓ Yes, when I was in the university, I usually went to the library to study or do my assignments because it was quiet and I could immerse myself in such a quiet atmosphere so that I could concentrate on my tasks.

'immerse'后面应加反身代词'myself'，表示动作反射到自己。

× I usually read some books or work on my assignments because I majored in urban planning.

✓ I usually read some books or work on my assignments because I major in urban planning.

根据上下文，描述的是现在的习惯，应使用一般现在时，'majored'为过去式，应改为'major'。

× I usually read some books or work on my assignments because I majored in urban planning.

✓ I usually read some books or work on my assignments because I major in urban planning.

描述现在的习惯动作，应该使用一般现在时，'majored'是过去式，应改为'major'。

× There are so many assignments to design, so I have to find a place, a quiet place to do them.

✓ There are so many assignments to design, so I have to find a place, a quiet place, to do them.

在'quiet place'后面应加逗号，表示插入语，使句子更清晰。

× Yes, there were different kinds of books, so I liked to go there and read them.

✓ Yes, there were different kinds of books, so I liked going there and reading them.

'liked to go'和'liked to read'虽然语法正确，但更自然的表达是'liked going'和'reading'，表示喜欢做某事的习惯。

× Sometime I will borrow some books to my home so that I can read them.

✓ Sometimes I would borrow some books to take home so that I could read them.

'Sometime'应为复数形式'Sometimes'表示有时。'will'用于过去习惯不合适，应使用'would'。'borrow some books to my home'表达不正确，应为'borrow some books to take home'。

× Sometime I will borrow some books to my home so that I can read them.

✓ Sometimes I would borrow some books to take home so that I could read them.

'borrow some books to my home'中'borrow'后面不直接跟地点，应使用'take home'表示带回家。

× I don't think he's in our country.

✓ I don't think they often go to the library in our country.

原句中'he's'指代不明且不符合上下文，应该指代'Chinese kids'，用复数'they'。

× I don't think he's in our country. Often go to the library because nowadays they prefer play on computer or tablets.

✓ I don't think they often go to the library in our country because nowadays they prefer playing on computers or tablets.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语。'prefer play'应为'prefer playing'。'computer'应为复数'computers'。

× I don't think he's in our country. Often go to the library because nowadays they prefer play on computer or tablets.

✓ I don't think they often go to the library in our country because nowadays they prefer playing on computers or tablets.

'play on computer or tablets'中应为'playing on computers or tablets'，'computer'和'tablets'应为复数。

× Few of them love to reading book so they seldom go to the library.

✓ Few of them love reading books, so they seldom go to the library.

'reading book'应为复数'reading books'，表示读书的习惯。