图书馆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you often go to the library?
考生
Uh no, I'm not a reading person and I felt it gave me more it. It makes me stressful going to library for studying so I prefer studying at home or at at a park.
考官
What do you usually do in the library?
考生
Well, I usually read some books and making my daily plans in the library for the next coming days because when I'm in the library, I feel like it's doing these things just keeps you, keeps you more motivated and productive.
考官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
考生
No, when I was a kid I was so busy doing some entertainment work like drawing pictures or practicing my writing skills so I didn't went to library quite often for that reason.
考官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
考生
Well, the answer depends on what age they're currently in. When it comes to preparing for some tests like middle school and and university students, they will prepare their exams in the library.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。
範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I find it stressful to study there. I prefer studying at home or in a park where I feel more relaxed.
What do you usually do in the library?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误，句子结构不完整，且表达重复。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: I usually read books and make daily plans for the upcoming days in the library because being there helps me stay motivated and productive.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中有语法错误（'didn't went'应为'didn't go'），句子较长且缺少连接词。建议注意动词时态，使用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: No, I didn't go to the library often when I was a kid because I was busy with activities like drawing and practicing writing.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为清晰，但有重复词汇（'and and'），且表达可以更简洁。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。
範例: It depends on their age. Middle school and university students often study in the library to prepare for exams.
文法
× I usually read some books and making my daily plans in the library for the next coming days because when I'm in the library, I feel like it's doing these things just keeps you, keeps you more motivated and productive.
✓ I usually read some books and make my daily plans in the library for the next coming days because when I'm in the library, I feel like doing these things just keeps you more motivated and productive.
这里的动词并列结构中，前面是动词原形read，后面应该保持一致，使用动词原形make，而不是making。并且后半句中，'it's doing these things'应改为'doing these things'，因为主语是'doing these things'，而不是'it'。
× I didn't went to library quite often for that reason.
✓ I didn't go to the library quite often for that reason.
助动词'did'后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式'went'。另外，'library'前应加定冠词'the'。
× It makes me stressful going to library for studying so I prefer studying at home or at at a park.
✓ It makes me stressed going to the library for studying, so I prefer studying at home or at a park.
'stressful'是形容事物的，描述人的感受应使用过去分词形容词'stressed'。'going to library'中，'library'前应加定冠词'the'。另外，'at at a park'重复，应去掉一个'at'。
× I prefer studying at home or at at a park.
✓ I prefer studying at home or at a park.
这里重复使用了介词'at'，应删除多余的一个。
× I didn't went to library quite often for that reason.
✓ I didn't go to the library quite often for that reason.
'go to library'中，'library'前应加定冠词'the'。
× I prefer studying at home or at at a park.
✓ I prefer studying at home or at a park.
重复使用了介词'at'，应删除多余的一个。
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