图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ như 'prefer reading ebooks than go to the library' nên là 'prefer reading ebooks to going to the library'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lỗi thừa từ như 'so I it's easier to looking'. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading ebooks to going there. Also, since there isn't a library near my home, it's easier for me to find information online.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ và có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi nhỏ về số nhiều và chia động từ như 'which create' nên là 'which creates'. Ngoài ra, câu 'helps me forget better' chưa rõ nghĩa, bạn nên dùng từ ngữ chính xác hơn để diễn đạt ý muốn nói.

範例: In the library, I usually relax by reading magazines because it helps me unwind after studying. I also listen to music with my headphones, which creates a calm atmosphere and helps me concentrate better. The quiet environment makes it an ideal place for these activities.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không rõ ràng, ví dụ 'I really went to the library' có thể gây hiểu nhầm, và 'interesting me' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, I did go to the library when I was a kid, but I found it quite dull. Instead, I preferred spending time at the park, the bookshop, or the coffee shop with my family, where I could relax and enjoy different activities. Those places felt more lively and interesting to me back then.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự tự tin và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'Chinese are often famous of hard work' nên là 'Chinese are often famous for their hard work', và 'Chinese kid are' nên là 'Chinese kids are'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp lại câu hỏi.

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but since Chinese people are known for their hard work, I believe that many Chinese children often go to the library to study and improve their knowledge.

× No, I don't usually go to the library because I prefer reading ebooks than go to the library and find books.

✓ No, I don't usually go to the library because I prefer reading ebooks to going to the library and finding books.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the gerund form when comparing activities, so 'prefer reading ebooks to going to the library' is correct. Also, after 'prefer', the second activity should be in the gerund form, not the base form 'go'.

× In addition, I don't have a library nearby so I it's easier to looking for the information online.

✓ In addition, I don't have a library nearby so it's easier to look for the information online.

After 'it's easier to', the verb should be in the base form 'look', not the gerund 'looking'. Also, 'I it's' is incorrect; it should be 'it's'.

× I also listen to music with my headphones, which create a calm atmosphere and helps me forget better.

✓ I also listen to music with my headphones, which creates a calm atmosphere and helps me forget better.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'music' (singular), so the verb should be singular 'creates' instead of 'create'.

× Yes, but I really went to the library when I was a kid because I found it quite dull.

✓ Yes, but I rarely went to the library when I was a kid because I found it quite dull.

The word 'really' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is 'rarely' to indicate infrequent visits. 'Rarely' is an adverb of frequency appropriate for past tense context.

× Instead, I prefer spending time at the park, at the bookshop or even the coffee shop with my family where I could relax and enjoy different activities.

✓ Instead, I preferred spending time at the park, at the bookshop or even the coffee shop with my family where I could relax and enjoy different activities.

Since the sentence refers to past habits ('when I was a kid'), the verb 'prefer' should be in the past tense 'preferred' to maintain tense consistency.

× I think those places have felt more lively and interesting me back then.

✓ I think those places felt more lively and interesting to me back then.

The present perfect 'have felt' is incorrect for a past time reference 'back then'. The simple past 'felt' is appropriate. Also, 'interesting me' should be 'interesting to me' to use the correct preposition.

× I'm Vietnamese so I don't know that Chinese do.

✓ I'm Vietnamese so I don't know what Chinese people do.

The phrase 'I don't know that Chinese do' is incorrect. It should be 'I don't know what Chinese people do' to correctly refer to the actions of Chinese people.

× Chinese kids often go to the library?

✓ Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

The sentence is a question but lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' at the beginning, which is necessary for forming questions in the present simple tense.

× But Chinese are often famous of hard work, so I think Chinese kid are hardworking too.

✓ But Chinese people are often famous for hard work, so I think Chinese kids are hardworking too.

'Chinese' here refers to people, so 'Chinese people' is clearer. 'Kid' should be plural 'kids' to agree with 'are'. Also, the correct preposition is 'famous for', not 'famous of'.

× So I think they are going to the library very often.

✓ So I think they go to the library very often.

The present simple tense 'go' is more appropriate here to express habitual actions rather than the present continuous 'are going'.