图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác hơn.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I am very busy with two jobs. However, I sometimes visit it when I have free time.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'looking' thay vì 'look'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng thì đúng và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Tránh nói lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh.

範例: In the library, I usually look for my favorite books to read. Sometimes, I also buy stationery items there.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ nhất quán và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lủng củng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích ngắn gọn, cụ thể.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my family was poor and the library was far from my home.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. Many of them visit the library daily to study and do their homework.

× No, I don't. I sometimes go to the library because I am busy with my work, so I have no time to often go to the library and because now I have two jobs in a day.

✓ No, I don't. I sometimes go to the library because I am busy with my work, so I don't often have time to go to the library and now I have two jobs in a day.

The phrase 'have no time to often go' is incorrect because 'often' should not split the infinitive 'to go'. The correct placement is 'don't often have time to go'. Also, 'because now I have two jobs in a day' is better connected without 'and because' to improve clarity.

× Umm, I usually looking for my favorite books which I I want to buy before I go to the library and sometimes I I also buy some items which make me.

✓ Umm, I usually look for my favorite books which I want to buy before I go to the library and sometimes I also buy some items which make me happy.

The verb 'usually' should be followed by the base form 'look' not the '-ing' form 'looking'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; adding 'happy' completes the meaning.

× No, I didn't because when I was a kid my house is very poor and the library is so far with my home, so it's very tough to me to usually go to library.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a kid my house was very poor and the library was very far from my home, so it was very tough for me to usually go to the library.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is past, 'is' should be 'was'. Also, 'so far with my home' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'far from my home'. 'It's very tough to me' should be 'it was very tough for me'. 'Go to library' needs the article 'the'.

× Yes, they do. I get that often goes the library even they went to the library every day to study because the student in Chinese very.

✓ Yes, they do. I think that they often go to the library and even go every day to study because students in China study very hard.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors and unclear phrasing. 'I get that often goes the library' is incorrect; it should be 'I think that they often go to the library'. 'Even they went' should be 'and even go'. 'The student in Chinese very' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'students in China study very hard' for clarity.