图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的频率和原因，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。例如，“give the library”应为“go to the library”，“I love it's a quiet environment”应为“because it has a quiet environment”。建议注意动词搭配和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment for me to concentrate on my homework. Moreover, I like using the computers there to access free digital resources, which is very convenient.

建議: 回答中信息较为混乱，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误，如“booked a book, a free chat room”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构，明确表达主要活动，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: Usually, I do my homework in the library. In addition, I sometimes book a free chat room to discuss study-related questions with my friends, which helps improve our efficiency.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，且有重复和口语化词汇。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更清晰自然。

範例: When I was a kid, I sometimes went to the library. However, my parents usually asked me to stay at home to finish my homework because they were worried about my safety. Still, I wanted to experience going to the library.

建議: 回答中存在词汇使用错误，如“review their accountants”应为“review their accounts”或“study their subjects”，句子结构不够准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和语法，表达更具体。

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library, especially before final exams. They use the library to review their subjects and prepare for important tests like graduation exams.

× I often give the library to do my homework and I love it's a quiet environment.

✓ I often go to the library to do my homework and I love its quiet environment.

这里 'give the library' 是错误的介词搭配，正确的表达是 'go to the library'。另外，'it's' 应为物主代词 'its'，表示图书馆的环境。

× I love it's a quiet environment.

✓ I love its quiet environment.

'it's' 是 'it is' 的缩写，表示 '它是'，这里应使用物主代词 'its'，表示 '它的'。

× I love to search some free digital information in the CAB library's computers.

✓ I love to search for some free digital information on the CAB library's computers.

动词 'search' 后应接介词 'for'，表示 '搜索'。另外，'in the computers' 应改为 'on the computers'，表示在电脑上。

× I also, you know, booked a book, a free chat room with my friend and so that I can talk some study relevant questions with him.

✓ I also, you know, booked a free chat room with my friend so that I can discuss some study-related questions with him.

'booked a book' 是重复且错误的表达，应去掉。'talk some study relevant questions' 应改为 'discuss some study-related questions'，更符合表达习惯。

× It's really good for us to chat and it's lead our efficiency.

✓ It's really good for us to chat and it leads to our efficiency.

'lead our efficiency' 语法错误，应为 'leads to our efficiency'，表示 '促进我们的效率'。

× I was, I I always stayed at home to finish my homework because my parents don't allow me to go out with myself and I so that I may not meet with some strangers or bad guys.

✓ I was, I always stayed at home to finish my homework because my parents didn't allow me to go out by myself so that I would not meet some strangers or bad people.

这里时态不一致，描述过去的事情应使用过去时，'don't allow' 应改为 'didn't allow'。'go out with myself' 应改为 'go out by myself'。'may not meet' 应改为 'would not meet'，符合过去的假设语气。

× my parents don't allow me to go out with myself

✓ my parents didn't allow me to go out by myself

'with myself' 是错误的反身代词用法，正确表达是 'by myself'，表示独自一人。

× I also, you know, booked a book, a free chat room with my friend and so that I can talk some study relevant questions with him.

✓ I also, you know, booked a free chat room with my friend so that I can discuss some study-related questions with him.

'booked a book' 是重复且错误的表达，应去掉。'talk some study relevant questions' 应改为 'discuss some study-related questions'，更符合表达习惯。

× they often go to libraries to review their accountants or homework.

✓ they often go to libraries to review their accounts or homework.

'accountants' 是 '会计师'，这里应为 'accounts'，表示 '账目' 或 '科目'。

× they go there to fulfill their starting goals like they have to preparing their graduates exams and also test.

✓ they go there to fulfill their study goals like preparing for their graduation exams and other tests.

'starting goals' 表达不准确，应为 'study goals'。'have to preparing' 语法错误，应为 'preparing for'。'graduates exams' 应为 'graduation exams'。