图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse manque de fluidité et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et évitez les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, utilisez des expressions comme "I don't go to the library often because I prefer visiting bookstores in Zhongshan, where the books feel new and untouched."

範例: I don't go to the library often because I prefer visiting bookstores in Zhongshan. I enjoy the fresh feeling of new books there, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

建議: Votre réponse est claire mais un peu courte et répétitive. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide et ajoutez des détails spécifiques pour enrichir votre réponse.

範例: In the library, I usually start by browsing the romantic novel and psychology sections, which interest me a lot. Then, I find a quiet spot to sit and read for a while.

建議: Votre réponse contient des erreurs de temps et de vocabulaire. Faites attention à la concordance des temps et évitez les expressions confuses. Par exemple, utilisez le passé simple pour parler du passé et expliquez clairement les raisons.

範例: I went to the library very often when I was a kid. I even had a VIP card to borrow books. My father loved reading, and his passion influenced me a lot.

建議: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et un langage familier. Utilisez un vocabulaire plus formel et des structures correctes pour améliorer la qualité de votre réponse.

範例: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library because people in China value education and knowledge. Parents encourage their children to read more to gain information and improve themselves, so visiting the library is quite common.

× No, I actually don't go to library so often because I prefer go to those bookstore in Zhongshan and when I go to bookstore I feel like the books are very new and fresh like without touching and those like diet.

✓ No, I actually don't go to the library so often because I prefer to go to those bookstores in Zhongshan and when I go to a bookstore I feel like the books are very new and fresh like without touching and those like diet.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'bookstore' should be plural 'bookstores' when referring to multiple places, and 'a bookstore' when referring to one. Additionally, 'prefer go' should be 'prefer to go' to be grammatically correct.

× No, I actually don't go to library so often because I prefer go to those bookstore in Zhongshan and when I go to bookstore I feel like the books are very new and fresh like without touching and those like diet.

✓ No, I actually don't go to the library so often because I prefer to go to those bookstores in Zhongshan and when I go to a bookstore I feel like the books are very new and fresh like without being touched and those like diet.

The phrase 'without touching' is incorrect here; it should be 'without being touched' to indicate the passive state of the books. Also, 'prefer go' requires the infinitive form 'to go'.

× I actually do go to the library very often when I was a kid.

✓ I actually did go to the library very often when I was a kid.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the past tense auxiliary 'did' should be used instead of 'do' to maintain tense consistency.

× Even when I go to Gaussian I still have the VIP card to let me borrow books there.

✓ Even when I went to Gaussian I still had the VIP card to let me borrow books there.

Since the sentence refers to past events, the verbs should be in past tense: 'go' to 'went' and 'have' to 'had'. Also, 'to let me borrow' is acceptable here as it expresses purpose.

× And it's because of my dad, he really loves reading book and it affects me a lot.

✓ And it's because of my dad, he really loves reading books and it affects me a lot.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because 'reading' generally refers to multiple books, not just one.

× Yes they do. And China people cares about education and knowledge.

✓ Yes, they do. And Chinese people care about education and knowledge.

'China people' is incorrect; the correct term is 'Chinese people'. Also, 'cares' should be 'care' to agree with the plural subject 'people'.

× And China people cares about education and knowledge.

✓ And Chinese people care about education and knowledge.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'care' not 'cares'.

× So if you want to get those information and become a better person, you gotta read more.

✓ So if you want to get that information and become a better person, you gotta read more.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'that' instead of 'those' which is used for countable plural nouns.