图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không tự nhiên, ví dụ như 'I'm not often go' nên là 'I don't often go'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp từ và làm câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I don't often go to the library because I usually read books online. However, when I do visit the library, I find it very quiet and peaceful, which helps me concentrate better.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'I should like choose' nên là 'I usually choose'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi chính tả như 'a piece' thay vì 'a place'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually choose a comfortable spot to sit. Then, I pick my favorite book and spend time reading quietly to focus on my work.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác, ví dụ 'When I work IT' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động trong quá khứ và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: When I was a child, I often went to the library with my parents and sister. They wanted to help me improve my reading skills, so we spent time there practicing together.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu chính xác và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I do not a Chinese case' không đúng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu sai.

範例: I am not very familiar with Chinese children, but I believe they enjoy reading and often visit libraries to study and improve their knowledge.

× I'm not often go to the library because I think nowadays we can like read a book on social webs and it's really uncomfortable.

✓ I don't often go to the library because I think nowadays we can read books on social websites and it's really uncomfortable.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm not often go' which is not a correct present tense form. The correct form is 'I don't often go' to express frequency in the present tense. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here and 'social webs' should be 'social websites' or 'social media.'

× When I go to library it's very quiet and everyone is focused on their work, so I feel like so alone and I.

✓ When I go to the library, it's very quiet and everyone is focused on their work, so I feel very alone.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library.' Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and I' which is incomplete and should be removed or completed. 'So alone' is better expressed as 'very alone' for clarity.

× When I come to library I should like choose the best place for me to feel comfortable and then I choose a my favorite book and read it.

✓ When I come to the library, I try to choose the best place for me to feel comfortable, and then I choose my favorite book and read it.

The phrase 'come to library' is missing the article 'the.' The modal verb 'should like' is incorrect; 'try to' is more appropriate here. Also, 'a my favorite book' is incorrect; it should be 'my favorite book.'

× I want to have a piece like sit and focus on my work.

✓ I want to have a place to sit and focus on my work.

The word 'piece' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'place.' Also, 'like sit' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to sit.'

× When I work IT I'm like often go to library with my parents and my sister since they want to help me to improve my reading skills, so they usually get me in the library to practice that skill.

✓ When I was in IT work, I often went to the library with my parents and my sister since they wanted to help me improve my reading skills, so they usually took me to the library to practice that skill.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'When I work IT' should be 'When I was in IT work' or 'When I worked in IT.' 'I'm like often go' is incorrect; it should be 'I often went.' 'Get me in the library' is incorrect; 'took me to the library' is correct past tense usage.

× I do not a Chinese case so I do not know much about them, but in Chinese skit I think they really love to reading and they is a best student in learning, so I think they usually go to library.

✓ I am not a Chinese person, so I do not know much about them, but in Chinese schools, I think they really love reading and they are the best students in learning, so I think they usually go to the library.

'I do not a Chinese case' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not a Chinese person.' 'Chinese skit' is likely a typo for 'Chinese school.' 'They is' should be 'they are.' 'A best student' should be 'the best students.' Also, 'go to library' needs the article 'the.'