图书馆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you often go to the library?
考生
Yes, I usually go to my school library because in this library I can use the computers with no free of charge and also there is plenty of air condition and.
考官
What do you usually do in the library?
考生
When I go to the library, I often use my school computer to study or to watch videos, and sometimes I go to sleep when I am tired.
考官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
考生
When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because my high school is small and it didn't have a library at that time.
考官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
考生
To be honest, I am not sure about habits and the frequencies of Chinese students when they whenever they go to the library. So I I guess maybe they often go to the library because they have to find.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
分數: 65.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'no free of charge' (nên là 'free of charge'). Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I usually go to my school library because I can use the computers free of charge, and there is plenty of air conditioning, which makes it comfortable.
What do you usually do in the library?
分數: 75.0建議: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như 'and' hoặc 'also'. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh nói 'go to sleep' trong thư viện vì nghe không tự nhiên, có thể nói 'rest' hoặc 'take a short break'.
範例: When I go to the library, I often use the school computer to study or watch videos, and sometimes I take a short break when I feel tired.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
分數: 80.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về thì (nên dùng 'was' thay vì 'is' cho 'my high school'). Bạn có thể thêm một câu nữa để mở rộng ý và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
範例: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because my high school was small and didn't have a library at that time. Therefore, I usually studied at home instead.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
分數: 50.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'when they whenever they'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và hoàn chỉnh ý tưởng. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên từ để mạch lạc.
範例: To be honest, I am not sure about the habits of Chinese students, but I guess they often go to the library because they need to find books and study materials.
文法
× Yes, I usually go to my school library because in this library I can use the computers with no free of charge and also there is plenty of air condition and.
✓ Yes, I usually go to my school library because in this library I can use the computers free of charge and also there is plenty of air conditioning.
The phrase 'with no free of charge' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'free of charge' without 'with no'. Also, 'air condition' should be 'air conditioning' as it is the correct noun form for the system that cools the air.
× Yes, I usually go to my school library because in this library I can use the computers with no free of charge and also there is plenty of air condition and.
✓ Yes, I usually go to my school library because in this library I can use the computers free of charge and also there is plenty of air conditioning.
The sentence ends with 'and' which is an incomplete conjunction usage. The sentence should end properly without 'and' or be connected to another clause.
× To be honest, I am not sure about habits and the frequencies of Chinese students when they whenever they go to the library.
✓ To be honest, I am not sure about the habits and the frequency of Chinese students when they go to the library.
The phrase 'habits and the frequencies' is awkward; 'frequency' is uncountable here and should be singular. Also, 'when they whenever they go' is redundant; only one of 'when' or 'whenever' is needed.
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