图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure to sound more natural. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I go to the library every day because it is a peaceful and relaxing place to read, and I am not distracted by social media or my phone.'

範例: I go to the library every day because it is a peaceful and relaxing place to read. Moreover, I am not distracted by social media or my phone there, so I can concentrate better.

建議: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and better vocabulary usage. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. For example, 'I am a professional physiotherapist, so I usually study new medical books in the library to improve my skills and keep up with technical knowledge.'

範例: I am a professional physiotherapist. Therefore, I usually study new medical books in the library to improve my skills and stay updated with the latest techniques.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to be concise and use linking words to explain your point. For example, 'Yes, I went to the library as a child, but mostly to read storybooks for fun and to relax my mind rather than for studying.'

範例: Yes, I went to the library as a child. However, I mostly read storybooks there for fun and to relax my mind, rather than for studying.

建議: Your answer lacks confidence and clarity. Try to give a direct answer and support it with reasoning. For example, 'I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many of them visit libraries regularly to study and improve their knowledge.'

範例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe many of them visit libraries regularly to study and improve their knowledge.

× Yes, I go library every day because it is a some peaceful and relaxable place for reading and it's a we cannot also distract for some things like a social media and a phone.

✓ Yes, I go to the library every day because it is a peaceful and relaxing place for reading and we cannot be distracted by things like social media and phones.

The sentence misses the preposition 'to' after 'go' which is necessary when referring to going to a place. 'A some' is incorrect; 'some' is used without 'a'. 'Relaxable' is not the correct adjective; 'relaxing' is appropriate. 'It's a we cannot also distract' is incorrect; it should be 'we cannot be distracted'. Also, 'a social media and a phone' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and 'phone' should be plural if generalizing.

× That's why I am preferring a library regularly for reading and.

✓ That's why I prefer the library regularly for reading.

The verb 'prefer' is a stative verb and is not usually used in the continuous form. Also, 'a library' should be 'the library' as it refers to a specific place. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be concise.

× Actually I am a doctor of physiotherapist by professionally and I want to improve my skills and technical issue for the day-to-day life that's why I am I am going to the library for studying a new and a great books of medical.

✓ Actually, I am a professional physiotherapist and I want to improve my skills and technical knowledge for day-to-day life. That's why I go to the library to study new and great medical books.

'Doctor of physiotherapist by professionally' is incorrect; it should be 'professional physiotherapist'. 'Technical issue' is incorrect; 'technical knowledge' fits better. 'I am I am going' is repetitive. 'For studying a new and a great books of medical' is incorrect; it should be 'to study new and great medical books'. Prepositions like 'to' are necessary after 'go' and before 'study'.

× Oh that's a great question. Yes when I was a kid I went to the library, but actually and general reason is not for the study, because for the fun library kept some books of story books that was I read mostly and my child and that gives me relaxing my mind and for fun.

✓ Oh, that's a great question. Yes, when I was a kid, I went to the library, but actually the general reason was not for studying. The library kept some story books that I mostly read as a child, and that relaxed my mind and was for fun.

'And general reason' should be 'the general reason'. 'Is not for the study' should be 'was not for studying' to match past tense. 'For the fun library kept some books of story books' is awkward; rephrased for clarity. 'That was I read mostly and my child' is incorrect; corrected to 'that I mostly read as a child'. 'Gives me relaxing my mind' is incorrect; corrected to 'relaxed my mind'.

× Actually I am an Indian so don't know about the Chinese kids but yeah maybe it's a chance. The Chinese kids also gone to the library because for the study.

✓ Actually, I am Indian so I don't know about Chinese kids, but yes, maybe they do. Chinese kids also go to the library for studying.

'Don't know' needs the subject 'I'. 'It's a chance' is unclear; replaced with 'maybe they do'. 'The Chinese kids also gone' is incorrect; 'gone' is past participle and needs auxiliary verb. Correct form is 'go'. 'Because for the study' is awkward; corrected to 'for studying'.