图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答えは直接的で簡潔ですが、口語的な表現（'cause'）は避け、文法的に正しい形にしましょう。また、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いです。

範例: No, I rarely go to the library because I prefer studying at home where I can focus better and read ebooks conveniently.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。'prefer for'は誤用で、'prefer'の使い方を正しくしましょう。また、具体的な説明をもっと明確にし、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。

範例: In the library, I usually read books that I need at the moment. For example, when I prepare for my English exam, I prefer reading English story books to improve my skills.

建議: 答えは比較的良いですが、'when I was a high in the high school'の表現は不自然です。'because'と'cause'の重複も避けましょう。文を簡潔にし、接続詞を適切に使うことが大切です。

範例: Yes, when I was in high school, there was a library near my home. I used to go there twice a week, usually on Mondays and Fridays, because I had free time and enjoyed studying in a quiet environment.

建議: 繰り返しや文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。'attend to study'は誤用で、正しい表現を使いましょう。具体的な比較や理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

範例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library. Nowadays, they tend to study longer hours than children in other countries because education is very important in China.

× No, I rarely go to the library 'cause I prefer study at my home and read ebooks.

✓ No, I rarely go to the library 'cause I prefer studying at my home and reading ebooks.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form (-ing) when expressing general preferences. Therefore, 'prefer study' should be corrected to 'prefer studying' and 'read' to 'reading' to maintain parallel structure.

× In library I tend to read a book which I need at that moment.

✓ In the library, I tend to read a book which I need at that moment.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase improves clarity.

× For example, when I prefer for my English exam, I prefer to English story books.

✓ For example, when I prepare for my English exam, I prefer English story books.

The phrase 'prefer for' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prepare for' when talking about studying for an exam. Also, 'prefer to English story books' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer English story books' without 'to'.

× Yes, when I was a high in the high school, there was a library near my home.

✓ Yes, when I was a high school student, there was a library near my home.

The phrase 'a high in the high school' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a high school student' to indicate the person's status.

× I used to go there twice a week, usually on Mondays and Fridays, because those were days I had free time after 'cause I enjoyed reading books and studying in a quiet environment.

✓ I used to go there twice a week, usually on Mondays and Fridays, because those were days I had free time and I enjoyed reading books and studying in a quiet environment.

The phrase 'after 'cause' is unclear and incorrect. It should be replaced with 'and' to connect the two reasons properly.

× Nowadays Chinese kids are more attend to study than other students and they are studying hours, hours.

✓ Nowadays Chinese kids attend study more than other students and they are studying for many hours.

The phrase 'are more attend to study' is incorrect; 'attend' is a verb and should not be used with 'more' in this way. Also, 'studying hours, hours' is unclear and should be 'studying for many hours' to express duration.

× It's a much, much longer than other kids.

✓ They study for much longer than other kids.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. Also, 'It's a much, much longer' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'much longer' and should be connected to the subject 'they study' with the preposition 'for' to indicate duration.