图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I don't go to the library often because of my hectic schedule. However, I visit it whenever I need important information for my studies.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary relevant to the context.

範例: I usually study in the library because it is a quiet place. This helps me concentrate better and complete my assignments efficiently.

建議: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Use simple and clear sentences. Start with a direct answer, then explain your reason with linking words like 'because'. Avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: No, I did not go to the library as a child because my studies were not very demanding at that time.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Avoid saying you don't know; instead, give a general opinion. Use linking words to connect ideas and use correct grammar and vocabulary.

範例: I am not sure about the exact situation, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in their country.

× Yes, it's really when I go to the library because I have not enough time to go at library due to my hectic schedule.

✓ Yes, it's rare when I go to the library because I do not have enough time to go to the library due to my hectic schedule.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'library'; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a place. Also, 'not enough time' should be 'do not have enough time' for grammatical correctness.

× But whenever I want to some important information then I'll go at the library.

✓ But whenever I want some important information, I go to the library.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition to indicate going to a place. Also, 'want to some important information' is incorrect; it should be 'want some important information' without 'to'.

× I usually do my task then I want to achieve in my related to my study.

✓ I usually do my tasks that I want to achieve related to my study.

The sentence has incorrect preposition usage and unclear structure. 'In my related to my study' is incorrect; it should be 'related to my study' without 'in my'.

× I do study in library because it is a quiet place.

✓ I study in the library because it is a quiet place.

The article 'the' is missing before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'do study' is unnecessary; simple present 'study' is sufficient.

× No, I did not go at the library when I was a child because on that time I had not burden regarding my study because there because on that time the level of study is very low compared then nowadays.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because at that time I did not have any burden regarding my studies since the level of study was very low compared to nowadays.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect; 'to' is correct for movement towards a place. Also, 'on that time' should be 'at that time'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That's why I did not go at the library when I was a kid.

✓ That's why I did not go to the library when I was a kid.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect; 'to' is the correct preposition to indicate going to a place.

× Well, I have no author know about the information about Chinese kids, but I think due to their advancement in their country they have option to go at the library.

✓ Well, I do not have authority to know information about Chinese kids, but I think due to their country's advancement, they have the option to go to the library.

The phrase 'have no author know' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have authority to know'. The preposition 'at' is incorrect; 'to' is correct when indicating going to a place. Also, 'option' needs the article 'the' before it.