图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，避免语法错误。

範例: I don't often go to the library because I usually relax after school by watching TV or listening to music. However, if I need specific information for my studies, I will visit the library.

建議: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不清楚，且有语法错误。建议先直接回答问题，再用连词补充细节，注意时态和语法的正确使用。

範例: In the library, I usually read books that interest me rather than those assigned by teachers. Besides reading, I sometimes watch TV shows or read stories on my phone while enjoying a cup of coffee.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构复杂且不自然。建议使用过去时态，简洁表达，并用连词连接观点。

範例: I sometimes went to the library when I was a kid because I enjoyed the quiet environment. However, I often found it boring since I couldn't concentrate on reading for a long time.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和语法，句子简洁明了，并用连词连接观点。

範例: I think many Chinese kids do not often go to the library because they have many lessons after school. However, some book lovers still visit the library regularly during their free time.

× I know someone who likes to reading books very much.

✓ I know someone who likes reading books very much.

动词like后面接动名词形式reading，而不是不定式to reading。

× I perform doing some relaxing things after school, like watching TV shows or listening some musics.

✓ I do some relaxing things after school, like watching TV shows or listening to some music.

perform后面不接doing，应该用do。listen后面接介词to，music是不可数名词，不用复数。

× listening some musics

✓ listening to some music

listen后面需要加介词to，music是不可数名词，不用复数。

× But why need to find some specific knowledge?

✓ But why do I need to find some specific knowledge?

疑问句缺少助动词do和主语I，句子结构不完整。

× I will also go to the library to find.

✓ I will also go to the library to find some.

句子不完整，find后面需要宾语。

× I think I always read some books that are interesting for myself and the books never the teachers led me to reading.

✓ I think I always read some books that are interesting to me, and the books are never the ones the teachers led me to read.

interesting后面用介词to me，led me to reading应改为led me to read，动词不定式。

× So I always watching some TV shows or reading some stories on my mobile phones and maybe have a cup of coffee so.

✓ So I am always watching some TV shows or reading some stories on my mobile phone and maybe having a cup of coffee.

always后面用现在进行时am watching，have改为having保持形式一致。

× I think I sometimes go to library when I was a kid, you know, I can enjoy the quiet place to read some books with my friends and but at that time I always felt the library be very very boring because I can't pay more attention for so long times just for my own books.

✓ I think I sometimes went to the library when I was a kid. I could enjoy the quiet place to read some books with my friends, but at that time I always felt the library was very boring because I couldn't pay attention for so long just to my own books.

描述过去时态，go改为went，can改为could，be改为was，can't改为couldn't，时态和语态不一致。

× I sometimes go to library

✓ I sometimes go to the library

library前缺少定冠词the，且library是单数名词。

× pay more attention for so long times

✓ pay more attention for so long

attention后面不接times，so long已经表示时间长度。

× I think plenty of people didn't go to the library.

✓ I think plenty of people don't go to the library.

根据上下文，描述现在情况，时态应为现在时，didn't改为don't。

× I think plenty of people didn't go to the library.

✓ I think plenty of people don't go to the library.

描述现在情况，不能用过去时。

× so they don't have enough time to reading books in library for a long time.

✓ so they don't have enough time to read books in the library for a long time.

to后面接动词原形read，不是reading。

× reading books in library for a long time.

✓ reading books in the library for a long time.

library前缺少定冠词the。

× But I know someone be a good fans of the books,

✓ But I know someone who is a good fan of books,

someone是单数，谓语用is，fan单数，books不用加the。

× someone be a good fans of the books,

✓ someone is a good fan of books,

第三人称单数someone，谓语动词用is。

× they will always go to the library and read some books on their week.

✓ they will always go to the library and read some books on their week off.

week前缺少修饰词，通常用week off表示休息时间。