图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'sing the surface of book'은 의미가 불분명하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 불필요한 반복을 줄이고, 문장 연결어를 사용하여 답변을 더 논리적으로 만들어야 합니다.

範例: Actually, I don't often go to the library because I don't enjoy reading books. However, I frequently visit bookstores because I love their calm atmosphere and enjoy browsing through the book covers.

建議: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많아 답변이 명확하지 않습니다. 'seen' 대신 'see'를 사용하고, 자신의 성격과 행동을 연결하여 더 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 문장 연결어를 사용해 답변을 자연스럽게 이어가야 합니다.

範例: Usually, I don't read books in the library; instead, I like to look at the titles and observe people reading. Since I am quite extroverted, I find it hard to concentrate on reading for long periods.

建議: 문장이 완성되지 않았고, 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많습니다. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 구체적인 이유와 경험을 명확히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because books were very popular at that time. I was passionate about reading and used to borrow several books regularly.

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 'keys'는 'kids'로 수정해야 하며, 문장을 간결하고 논리적으로 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 자신의 의견을 명확히 표현하고 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. However, since China is a large country, I think library usage might vary depending on the city and local culture.

× The bookstore it is quite calm and I like to sing the surface of book.

✓ The bookstore is quite calm and I like to see the surface of books.

'The bookstore it is' is redundant; 'it is' should be removed. Also, 'sing the surface of book' seems to be a typo or misuse; likely intended 'see the surface of books'. 'Book' should be plural as it refers to books in general.

× I'm usually I don't read the books, I just seen the titles of the books and like watching reading people.

✓ Usually, I don't read the books; I just see the titles of the books and like watching people read.

The phrase 'I'm usually I don't read the books' is incorrect; 'Usually, I don't read the books' is better. 'Seen' is past participle and should be 'see' to match present tense. 'Watching reading people' is awkward; 'watching people read' is correct.

× I'm usually I don't read the books, I just seen the titles of the books and like watching reading people.

✓ Usually, I don't read the books; I just see the titles of the books and like watching people read.

'Seen' is the past participle form and requires an auxiliary verb; here, simple present 'see' is appropriate to match the habitual action.

× Yeah, actually I went to the library often when I was a little kid because at the time the writing about the books are really popular, so I was so passionate about it.

✓ Yeah, actually I went to the library often when I was a little kid because at the time the writings about the books were really popular, so I was so passionate about it.

The phrase 'the writing about the books are' has subject-verb disagreement; 'writing' should be plural 'writings' and verb 'are' should be 'were' to match past tense.

× So I rent some books and.

✓ So I rented some books.

The sentence is incomplete and 'rent' should be in past tense 'rented' to match the past context.

× I'm curious so I don't know well about Chinese keys often go to the library, but the Chinese has a large of the land so I think it's depending on the city because there are a lot of like ethics in there.

✓ I'm curious, so I don't know well whether Chinese kids often go to the library, but China has a large land area, so I think it depends on the city because there are a lot of ethnic groups there.

'Chinese keys' is a typo for 'Chinese kids'. 'The Chinese has a large of the land' is incorrect; 'China has a large land area' is correct. 'It's depending' should be 'it depends'. 'Like ethics' is likely 'ethnic groups'. Pronouns and nouns need correction for clarity and grammar.