图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some unnatural expressions and minor grammar errors. For example, "climb and forecast atmosphere" is unclear and likely a mistake. Also, "library provide" should be "library provides." Try to use clearer and more natural phrases, and avoid redundancy. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where people come to study together. The calm and focused atmosphere helps me concentrate better on learning languages. Also, the library provides useful resources like electricity and air conditioning, which make studying more comfortable.

建議: Your answer is clear but has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, "watch interesting novels" is incorrect; you should say "read interesting novels." Also, use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct verb forms.

範例: I usually study languages in the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate on learning new vocabulary and improving my grammar. Sometimes, I also read interesting novels there to relax and reduce mental stress after studying.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. For example, "I often go" should be "I often went," and "the only recreation way is reading the novel" should be "the only way to relax was reading novels." Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like "maybe 1. So big." Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using correct grammar.

範例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because my mother did not allow me to watch TV, and I did not have a mobile phone. So, reading novels was my only way to relax and enjoy my free time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, "it depend" should be "it depends," and "the others people maybe may like" is redundant. Also, "in the outdoor" should be "outdoors." Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid redundancy.

範例: It's hard to say because it depends on their interests. For example, I like to go to the library, but other children may prefer playing outdoors with friends or watching TV at home. Both are good ways for them to relax.

× The climb and forecast atmosphere help me concentrate better on studying language.

✓ The calm and focused atmosphere helps me concentrate better on studying language.

The original sentence contains incorrect word choices 'climb' and 'forecast' which should be 'calm' and 'focused' to correctly describe the atmosphere. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'atmosphere'.

× Also, the library provide many useful resources such as the electricity or the air conditioner, which can enhance my learning.

✓ Also, the library provides many useful resources such as electricity and air conditioning, which can enhance my learning.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' instead of 'provide'. Also, 'the electricity' and 'the air conditioner' are better expressed as 'electricity' and 'air conditioning' without 'the' for general resources.

× I usually study language in the library because it is very quiet which help me concentrate on learning new vocabulary or improve my grammar ability.

✓ I usually study language in the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate on learning new vocabulary and improve my grammar ability.

The relative clause 'which help me' should use 'helps' to agree with the singular antecedent 'it'. Also, 'or' should be 'and' to correctly connect the two activities.

× Sometimes I also watch interesting novels there as it help me relax and reduce mental stress after studying.

✓ Sometimes I also read interesting novels there as it helps me relax and reduce mental stress after studying.

The verb 'watch' is incorrect when referring to novels; it should be 'read'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'it'.

× Yes, I often go to the library when I was a kid, maybe 1. So big.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. It was very big.

The verb tense should be past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. The phrase 'maybe 1. So big.' is unclear and corrected to 'It was very big.' for clarity.

× So the only recreation way is reading the novel.

✓ So the only recreational activity was reading novels.

The sentence refers to past time, so 'is' should be 'was'. Also, 'recreation way' is incorrect; 'recreational activity' is the correct phrase. 'Reading the novel' is better as 'reading novels' for generality.

× It help me relax.

✓ It helped me relax.

The verb should be in past tense 'helped' to agree with the past context.

× I think it depend on their interest.

✓ I think it depends on their interest.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× but the others people maybe may like to play with friends in the outdoor or watch the TV at home.

✓ but other people may like to play with friends outdoors or watch TV at home.

'the others people' is incorrect; it should be 'other people'. 'the outdoor' should be 'outdoors' as an adverb. 'the TV' should be 'TV' without 'the'.

× That's both a great way to help them relax themselves.

✓ Those are both great ways to help them relax.

'That's' (that is) is singular but refers to plural 'both', so it should be 'Those are'. 'a great way' should be plural 'great ways' to match 'both'. 'Relax themselves' is redundant; 'relax' suffices.