图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki penggunaan tense dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan detail yang relevan.

範例: When I was in high school, I used to go to the library every day because it helped me support my academic studies.

建議: Gunakan bentuk kata kerja yang benar dan tambahkan detail spesifik untuk membuat jawaban lebih jelas dan alami.

範例: I usually look for books that support my academic work and help me improve my knowledge.

建議: Perbaiki tense dan struktur kalimat, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan dengan lebih jelas dan alami.

範例: No, I never went to the library when I was a kid because there was no library near my house, so I didn't have access to one.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta spesifik untuk menjawab pertanyaan dengan jelas.

範例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they are known for being studious and have easy access to libraries.

× When I'm in high school, I used to go to the library every day and it's it's helped me, helps me to support my academic.

✓ When I was in high school, I used to go to the library every day and it helped me to support my academic work.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'I'm' instead of past tense 'I was' to refer to a past time. Also, 'it's it's helped me, helps me' is redundant and inconsistent; 'it helped me' is the correct past tense form. Use past tense to describe past habits and effects.

× I do looking for books that support my academic and improve my knowledge.

✓ I look for books that support my academic work and improve my knowledge.

The phrase 'do looking' is incorrect; the verb 'look' should be used in its base form without 'do' when describing habitual actions. Use 'look for' to express the action correctly.

× No, I never go to the library when I work in because there is no library near my house and I don't have any access to the library.

✓ No, I never went to the library when I was working because there was no library near my house and I didn't have any access to the library.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' and 'work' with past context. Use past tense 'went' and 'was working' to correctly describe past events. Also, 'there is' should be 'there was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I think so because they are known for a smart people and I think they are easily to go to library every day.

✓ I think so because they are known to be smart people and I think they easily go to the library every day.

The phrase 'a smart people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also, 'easily to go' is incorrect; 'easily go' is the correct form. The article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify it.