图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to reduce hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words such as 'because' or 'and'.

範例: Yes, I often visit the library because it is a peaceful place that helps me focus on my projects. Additionally, I enjoy borrowing books to expand my knowledge.

建議: Work on reducing filler words and hesitations to improve fluency. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect your ideas clearly. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details.

範例: Usually, I read books that help me with my projects. I also visit the library to relax by listening to music with my earphones and enjoying the peaceful environment.

建議: Focus on grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons clearly. Also, try to be more specific in your answers.

範例: When I was a child, I rarely visited the library because I preferred playing outside with my friends. Moreover, my family had enough books for me, so I did not need to go to the library.

建議: Avoid vague expressions like 'I don't know' and 'maybe'. Try to give a clear opinion supported by reasons or examples. Use correct verb forms and linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

範例: I believe Chinese children often go to the library because education is highly valued in China, and many children enjoy reading and studying there.

× I enjoy borrowing books from.

✓ I enjoy borrowing books.

The preposition 'from' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'borrow' already implies taking something from somewhere. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without 'from'.

× Usually I read books, uh, which help me, helps me to, uh, do my project and also sometimes I uh, visit, uh, in order to, uh, relax, uh, and I listen music with my earphones and, umm, enjoy the peaceful, uh, environment.

✓ Usually I read books, which help me to do my project, and also sometimes I visit in order to relax, and I listen to music with my earphones and enjoy the peaceful environment.

The verb 'help' should agree with the plural noun 'books', so 'help' is correct, not 'helps'. Also, 'listen music' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'listen to music'. The sentence is also improved by removing unnecessary fillers and correcting prepositions.

× When I was a child, I really quite really visited a library.

✓ When I was a child, I rarely visited a library.

The phrase 'really quite really' is awkward and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'rarely' or 'not often'. Using 'rarely' correctly conveys the frequency in past tense.

× I prefer to playing outside with my friends and additionally my family had enough books for me for my age, so I did not need to visit library.

✓ I preferred playing outside with my friends and additionally my family had enough books for me for my age, so I did not need to visit the library.

After 'prefer', the correct form is either 'to play' or the gerund 'playing'. Here, 'preferred playing' fits better in past tense. Also, 'visit library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× I can say that maybe they are often visited, visit library and yeah.

✓ I can say that maybe they often visit the library, and yeah.

The phrase 'are often visited' is passive and incorrect here; the active form 'they often visit' is correct. Also, 'visit library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.