图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete. Try to make your sentences complete and avoid repeating similar adjectives without connecting them properly. Use linking words to make your description more natural and coherent. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a cozy and calm place where I can practice my English effectively.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and proper sentence structure. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and make sure your vocabulary fits the context.

範例: Usually, I go to the library to study because the quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate and learn faster.

建議: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question. However, improve your grammar by saying 'let me go' instead of 'let me to go'. Also, you can add a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I never went to the library when I was a kid because my parents only allowed me to go to school.

建議: Avoid using filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Start with a clear statement and use linking words to contrast your knowledge about Chinese kids with your opinion about Iran. This will make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but in Iran, people generally do not go to the library often, and they do not encourage their children to visit it.

× I used to go to the library when I was younger and I like to practice my English in library.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was younger and I liked to practice my English in the library.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Used to' and 'was' indicate past, so 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to maintain consistency. Also, 'in library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I used to go to the library when I was younger and I like to practice my English in library.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was younger and I liked to practice my English in the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' is incorrect here.

× Library had a cozy and vibrant and calm and safe and.

✓ The library was cozy, vibrant, calm, and safe.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured with repeated 'and's. It should be a complete sentence with proper conjunctions and verb 'was' to describe the library.

× I usually go for a study and be with a good place and people.

✓ I usually go to study and be in a good place with good people.

'Go for a study' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to study'. Also, 'be with a good place and people' is awkward; it should be 'be in a good place with good people'.

× I usually go for a study and be with a good place and people.

✓ I usually go to study and be in a good place with good people.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect with 'study'; the correct preposition is 'to'. Also, 'be with a good place' should be 'be in a good place'.

× I think umm in the mood of library you can study and you can really be fast.

✓ I think, umm, in the mood of the library, you can study and really be productive.

The phrase 'be fast' is unclear; 'be productive' fits better. Also, 'in the mood of library' needs 'the' before 'library' and commas for clarity.

× I have never been in the library when I was a kid and my parents didn't let me to go anywhere except of a school.

✓ I had never been to the library when I was a kid, and my parents didn't let me go anywhere except school.

The past perfect 'had never been' fits better with 'when I was a kid'. 'Been in the library' should be 'been to the library'. 'Didn't let me to go' is incorrect; 'let' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. 'Except of a school' should be 'except school'.

× I have never been in the library when I was a kid and my parents didn't let me to go anywhere except of a school.

✓ I had never been to the library when I was a kid, and my parents didn't let me go anywhere except school.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'been' in this context; 'been to' is correct. Also, 'except of a school' is incorrect; 'except school' is correct.

× Umm, I don't know about Chinese people and Chinese kids, Umm, but in Iran, uh, I think umm, people don't go to library and they don't encourage their children to go to the library.

✓ Umm, I don't know about Chinese people and Chinese kids, umm, but in Iran, uh, I think umm, people don't go to the library and they don't encourage their children to go to the library.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. It should be 'go to the library'.