图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法の誤りを直し、より自然で効果的な表現を使いましょう。例えば、"I haven't been to the library since last year"のように現在完了形を正しく使うことが重要です。

範例: I haven't been to the library since last year because I usually find information online.

建議: 文の構造を整理し、意味が明確になるようにしましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、内容を具体的に説明してください。

範例: I usually look for books that interest me, gather information from the internet, or walk around the library to find some interesting books.

建議: 時制の一致に注意し、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。また、具体的な詳細を加えて内容を豊かにしてください。

範例: Yes, my parents used to take me and my brother to the library every Saturday, and we borrowed five or six books, including picture books and novels. I really enjoyed spending time there.

建議: 質問に対してもう少し推測や意見を加えて答える練習をしましょう。単に知らないと答えるのではなく、一般的な印象や理由を述べると良いです。

範例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids visit libraries because reading is encouraged in schools.

× Recently I haven't.

✓ Recently I haven't gone.

The sentence 'Recently I haven't.' is incomplete because the verb is missing. The present perfect negative form requires a past participle verb after 'haven't'. The correct form is 'I haven't gone.'

× I haven't go to library so since last year.

✓ I haven't gone to the library since last year.

The verb 'go' should be in the past participle form 'gone' after 'haven't'. Also, the article 'the' is needed before 'library'. The phrase 'so since last year' is incorrect; 'since last year' is sufficient.

× I'm looking for a book which I really wanted to read and I gather information from Internet or X or I just walk around the library then I find my some something fancy books for me.

✓ I look for a book that I really want to read, gather information from the Internet or other sources, or just walk around the library and find some interesting books for me.

The original sentence mixes present continuous and past tense incorrectly. Since the question is about usual activities, the simple present tense is appropriate. Also, 'which' should be 'that' for defining clauses, and 'Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'my some something fancy books' is unclear and corrected to 'some interesting books'.

× Yes, my parents bring me and my brother to the library every Saturday and we borrowed 5 books or six books like picture books or children books or something novels and I really enjoyed a lot of time in library.

✓ Yes, my parents brought me and my brother to the library every Saturday, and we borrowed five or six books like picture books, children's books, or some novels, and I really enjoyed spending a lot of time in the library.

The verb 'bring' should be in past tense 'brought' to match 'borrowed' and the past time frame. Numbers should be written consistently ('five or six'). 'Children books' should be 'children's books'. The phrase 'something novels' is corrected to 'some novels'. 'Enjoyed a lot of time' is corrected to 'enjoyed spending a lot of time'. The article 'the' is needed before 'library'.