图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "I go library often" yerine "I often go to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "the Deutsch" yerine "German" kullanmalısınız. Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için cümleleri net ve mantıklı bir sırayla kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizin sonunda tamamlanmamış bir ifade var, bunu düzeltmelisiniz.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library to read books and study languages for my IELTS exam. First, I study English, and then I practice German. I usually spend about an hour there, and sometimes I eat my sandwich while studying.

建議: Cümleniz eksik ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. "Do my homeworks" yerine "do my homework" demelisiniz çünkü "homework" sayılamayan bir isimdir. Ayrıca, cümleniz mantıksal olarak karışık ve bazı ifadeler tamamlanmamış. Cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla bağlayarak daha akıcı ve anlaşılır hale getirin.

範例: In the library, I usually study languages and do my homework. Sometimes, when I get bored, I play games on the computer. After finishing, I eat my sandwich before leaving.

建議: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime sırası hataları var. "I went library" yerine "I went to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "I started library to go" ifadesi yanlış, "I started going to the library" daha doğru olur. Anlatımınızı daha net yapmak için cümlelerinizi sade ve doğru yapıda kurmalısınız.

範例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. I started going there when I was about 13 or 14, but I can't remember exactly. The first time I went, I read a book about a tiny princess.

建議: Cevabınız çok kısa ve soruya doğrudan yanıt vermiyor. Soruyu anladığınızı göstermek için daha uzun ve açıklayıcı cümleler kurmalısınız. Örneğin, bilginiz olmadığını belirtirken nedenini veya genel bir gözleminizi ekleyebilirsiniz.

範例: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I don't have much information about their habits. However, I think many children enjoy reading and studying in libraries.

× Yes, I go library often to read books and study my languages for my IELTS exam.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read books and study my languages for my IELTS exam.

The preposition 'to' is required after the verb 'go' when indicating a destination. The phrase should be 'go to the library' instead of 'go library'. This is a common prepositional error.

× After that I study the Deutsch.

✓ After that I study German.

The definite article 'the' is not used before languages in English. Also, 'Deutsch' should be translated to 'German' when speaking English. Therefore, the correct phrase is 'study German'.

× Just a noun, just an hour and I eat my sandwich and I.

✓ I spend just an hour there, and then I eat my sandwich.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. It seems to be fragments combined without clear connections. The correction provides a complete and coherent sentence.

× Study my languages, do my homeworks, play games on computer sometimes when I get bored and my eat my sandwich after I leave there.

✓ I study my languages, do my homework, sometimes play games on the computer when I get bored, and eat my sandwich before I leave.

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. Also, 'play games on computer' needs the article 'the' before 'computer'. The phrase 'my eat my sandwich' is incorrect; 'my' should be removed. The sentence is also reordered for clarity.

× Yes, I went library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

Again, the preposition 'to' is missing after 'went'. The correct phrase is 'went to the library'. This is a prepositional error combined with past tense usage.

× I first of all I started library to go in my 13 or 14, I can't remember good.

✓ First of all, I started going to the library when I was 13 or 14; I can't remember exactly.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Started library to go' is incorrect; the verb phrase should be 'started going to the library'. Also, 'in my 13 or 14' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was 13 or 14'. 'I can't remember good' should be 'I can't remember exactly' or 'well'.

× But when I first came here, came there, I read a book about the tiny Princess.

✓ But when I first came there, I read a book about the tiny princess.

The phrase 'came here, came there' is confusing; 'came there' suffices. Also, 'princess' should not be capitalized unless it is part of a title. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper preposition use.