图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to directly answer the question with a simple topic sentence, then add a reason or feeling with linking words. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place to study."

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place to study. Moreover, I enjoy reading different kinds of books there, which helps me learn new things.

建議: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds like "uh" and incomplete sentences. For example, "I usually read books in the library because buying books is expensive. I enjoy story books and historical books."

範例: I usually read books in the library because buying books can be expensive. For example, I enjoy reading story books and historical books, which help me understand different cultures.

建議: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Use past tense correctly and organize your ideas logically. Start with a direct answer, then add supporting details with linking words. For example, "Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. Usually, my whole class visited the library with our teachers to read many books."

範例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. Usually, my whole class visited the library with our teachers to read many books, which helped us improve our reading skills.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on answering the question directly and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because they enjoy reading various books, such as comic books, which help develop their creativity and memory."

範例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because they enjoy reading various books, such as comic books. This habit helps them develop creativity and improve their memory skills.

× Yes, I frequently visit the library to study on read books.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library to study or read books.

The phrase 'study on read books' is incorrect. The correct form is to use 'study or read books' to indicate two separate activities. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary here and 'read' should be in base form after 'to'.

× It's quite environmental but I also feel very comfortable to read book because library is the one of the place which can people literally feel very.

✓ It's quite peaceful and I also feel very comfortable reading books because the library is one of the places where people can literally feel relaxed.

The word 'environmental' is incorrectly used; 'peaceful' or 'quiet' fits better. 'To read book' should be 'reading books' for correct verb form and plural noun. 'Library is the one of the place' should be 'the library is one of the places' for article and plural noun correctness. 'Which can people literally feel very' is ungrammatical; it should be 'where people can literally feel relaxed'.

× Uh, I usually do in the library to read a books.

✓ Uh, I usually read books in the library.

The phrase 'do in the library to read a books' is incorrect. The verb 'do' is unnecessary here. 'Read books' is the correct verb phrase. Also, 'a books' is incorrect; 'books' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× When we, when we buy a book, it's very expensive.

✓ When we buy a book, it's very expensive.

The sentence is mostly correct but the repetition 'when we, when we' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× Then then I will go to the library and read many kind of books, like a a story books, historical story books.

✓ Then I will go to the library and read many kinds of books, like story books and historical story books.

'Many kind of books' should be 'many kinds of books' to agree in number. 'A a story books' is incorrect; 'story books' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× Sometimes I read a good.

✓ Sometimes I read good books.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. 'A good' is incomplete; it should be 'good books' to complete the meaning.

× Yes, I go to the library when I am a kid.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

The sentence refers to a past event, so past tense verbs 'went' and 'was' should be used instead of present tense 'go' and 'am'.

× I go for not a daily basis.

✓ I did not go on a daily basis.

The phrase 'go for not a daily basis' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' for 'on a daily basis'. Also, the negative form should be 'did not go' for past tense.

× I go only when I am a school.

✓ I went only when I was at school.

Past tense verbs 'went' and 'was' should be used. Also, the preposition 'at' is correct with 'school'.

× Teachers are all teachers with teachers all my all class going to the library and read so many books.

✓ All my classmates and teachers went to the library and read many books.

The original sentence is confusing and uses pronouns incorrectly. 'All my class' should be 'all my classmates'. The verb tense should be past 'went' and 'read'. The phrase 'teachers are all teachers with teachers' is redundant and incorrect.

× Yes, Chinese can go to the library because the Chinese is very good creative mind.

✓ Yes, Chinese children can go to the library because they have very good creative minds.

'Chinese' as a noun needs clarification; 'Chinese children' is better. 'The Chinese is' is incorrect; 'they have' is correct. 'Creative mind' should be plural 'creative minds'.

× They go to the library and read many kind of books like a comic books.

✓ They go to the library and read many kinds of books like comic books.

'Many kind of books' should be 'many kinds of books'. 'A comic books' is incorrect; 'comic books' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× A Chinese kids very up of a like a very good memory.

✓ Chinese kids have very good memories.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'A Chinese kids' mixes singular and plural. 'Very up of a like a very good memory' is incorrect. The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct.