图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. "I cry because I need a quiet song" ifadesi anlam açısından uygun değil. Ayrıca, cümleniz fazla uzun ve karmaşık. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Kısa ve net cümlelerle doğrudan soruya yanıt verin.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a medical student and need a quiet place to study for long hours. It helps me concentrate better than studying at home.

建議: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "I usually it's like I usually" ifadesi anlam bozukluğuna neden oluyor. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla desteklenmeli. Daha spesifik ve net ifadeler kullanmaya özen gösterin.

範例: I usually study for my medical license exam in the library. I spend about four months preparing, reading textbooks, and taking notes in a quiet environment.

建議: Cümleniz uzun ve karmaşık, bu da anlamı zorlaştırıyor. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kurun. Ayrıca, "libraries are not enough" ifadesi yerine "there were not many libraries" gibi daha doğal ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

範例: No, I did not go to the library as a child because there were not many libraries in my country. Also, it was not safe for children to go alone, so I preferred studying at home.

建議: Cevabınızda belirsizlik ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "Going often on the library" ifadesi yanlış. Ayrıca, tahminlerinizi daha net ve düzgün cümlelerle ifade edin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve anlamsız ifadeleri çıkarın.

範例: I don't know many Chinese kids personally, so I am not sure. However, I think they might often go to libraries or study labs to focus on their studies.

× So I usually go study on a library and I cry because I need a quiet song and study my exams.

✓ So I usually go to study in a library and I cry because I need a quiet place and study for my exams.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'library'; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating going to a place. Also, 'study on a library' should be 'study in a library' to indicate location. 'Cry' seems to be a mistranslation or error; likely intended 'try'. 'Quiet song' is incorrect; it should be 'quiet place'. 'Study my exams' should be 'study for my exams' to indicate preparation.

× I usually study in the library to my exams.

✓ I usually study in the library for my exams.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate purpose is 'for'. 'Study for my exams' means preparing for exams.

× I need to pass an exam which is a medical student license exam and I need four months for this.

✓ I need to pass the exam which is the medical student license exam and I need four months for this.

When referring to a specific exam known to both speaker and listener, the definite article 'the' should be used instead of 'an'.

× So I need a quiet time and I usually it's like I usually read textbooks and write on them.

✓ So I need quiet time and usually, I read textbooks and write in them.

'Quiet time' does not need an article here. 'Write on them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'write in them' when referring to writing inside books or textbooks.

× No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because the libraries are not enough in my country and when I was a kid, it's not a safe environment to let the kids go in the library in their own, so I usually prefer to stay at home and study at home.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because there are not enough libraries in my country and when I was a kid, it was not a safe environment to let kids go to the library on their own, so I usually preferred to stay at home and study at home.

'The libraries are not enough' should be 'there are not enough libraries' to correctly express quantity. 'It's not a safe environment' should be past tense 'it was' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Go in the library in their own' should be 'go to the library on their own'. 'Usually prefer' should be past tense 'usually preferred' to match past context.

× Well, there are not so many Chinese kids in my environment, so I don't know about the Chinese kids going often on the library, but I guess probably they are going often, mostly going in labs.

✓ Well, there are not so many Chinese kids in my environment, so I don't know about Chinese kids going often to the library, but I guess probably they go often, mostly going to labs.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'library'; it should be 'to the library'. Also, 'going often' is better as 'go often' for natural expression. 'Going in labs' should be 'going to labs'.