图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I often go to the library to collect books, publications, and journals because it is very helpful; I can find many resources all under one roof."

範例: Yes, I often go to the library to collect books, publications, and journals because it is very helpful; I can find many resources all under one roof.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words like "because" and "so" properly and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, "I usually read newspapers and storybooks in the library because my hectic schedule doesn't allow me to read them at home."

範例: I usually read newspapers and storybooks in the library because my hectic schedule doesn't allow me to read them at home.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, say "I was very fascinated by searching for new storybooks." Also, avoid repeating "new" unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid to find storybooks, poetry books, and magazines. I was very fascinated by searching for new storybooks.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammatical mistakes. Try to make your sentences simpler and clearer. For example, "Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their schools schedule daily visits. They find many new things there."

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their schools schedule daily visits. They find many new things there.

× Yes, I often go to library to collect some books, publications, journals and many other articles.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to collect some books, publications, journals and many other articles.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× It it is very helpful for me because I found I found more things in one under one roof and and the librarian.

✓ It is very helpful for me because I found more things under one roof and the librarian.

The sentence contains repeated words ('It it', 'I found I found', 'and and') which are redundant and disrupt sentence clarity. Removing duplicates improves readability and correctness.

× Usually I try to read newspaper and story books in library because for my hectic schedule I couldn't get any time to read newspaper.

✓ Usually I try to read the newspaper and story books in the library because, due to my hectic schedule, I couldn't get any time to read the newspaper.

'Newspaper' and 'library' are singular, countable nouns that require the definite article 'the' when referring to specific or known entities. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× So during my library time I tried my best.

✓ So during my library time, I try my best.

The context suggests a habitual action in the present, so the present tense 'try' is more appropriate than the past tense 'tried'. Adding a comma after 'time' improves readability.

× I was very fascinating about searching new story book.

✓ I was very fascinated about searching new story books.

The adjective 'fascinating' describes something that causes fascination, while 'fascinated' describes a feeling experienced by a person. Here, the student is describing their feeling, so 'fascinated' is correct. Also, 'story book' should be plural 'story books' to match the context.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it's it's their school schedule scheduled program to visit library daily and they find found many new things in library and it's their new.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it's their school-scheduled program to visit the library daily, and they find many new things in the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. The phrase 'school schedule scheduled program' is redundant; 'school-scheduled program' is correct. The word 'find found' is a repetition error; only 'find' is needed. The last phrase 'and it's their new' is incomplete and unclear, so it has been omitted for clarity.