图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'go to the neighborhoods' và 'no library nearby the my home'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về thói quen đọc sách điện tử và lý do không đến thư viện gần nhà một cách mạch lạc.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading e-books and online articles. Also, there isn't a library near my home, so it's not convenient for me.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'it's quite a strange to read or take notes' và câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually look for the most updated books to get the latest information for my studies. Then, I find a quiet place to read and take notes carefully.

建議: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'went to the neighboring'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và có cấu trúc tốt hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Bạn có thể nói về trải nghiệm cụ thể khi đến thư viện lúc nhỏ.

範例: Yes, I went to the library for the first time when I was in 4th grade. It was interesting because I found many different books and enjoyed reading new stories and learning new things.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi như 'might to read' và 'Rare we can'. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và dùng từ phù hợp để mô tả thói quen của trẻ em.

範例: I'm not sure about Chinese children, but in Vietnam, many kids often go to the library because there are many small libraries near their homes. They usually read books and do their homework there.

× No, I prefer to read e-book and online articles instead of go to the neighborhoods.

✓ No, I prefer to read e-books and online articles instead of going to the neighborhoods.

The noun 'e-book' should be pluralized to 'e-books' to match the plural 'online articles'. Also, after 'instead of', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'go' changes to 'going'.

× Besides that, there are no library nearby the my home.

✓ Besides that, there is no library near my home.

'Library' is singular, so 'there are' should be 'there is'. 'Nearby' is an adjective/adverb, but here the preposition 'near' is correct before 'my home'. Also, 'the my home' is incorrect; 'my home' suffices.

× No, I prefer to read e-book and online articles instead of go to the neighborhoods.

✓ No, I prefer to read e-books and online articles instead of going to the neighborhoods.

After 'instead of', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'go' changes to 'going'.

× After that I often find it's quite a strange to read or take notes.

✓ After that I often find it's quite strange to read or take notes.

The word 'strange' is an adjective and does not need 'a' before it. The phrase 'quite a strange' is incorrect; it should be 'quite strange'.

× I also.

✓ I also do that.

The sentence 'I also.' is incomplete and lacks a verb. It should be completed to express the intended meaning, for example, 'I also do that.'

× Yes, I did the first time I went to the neighboring when I was in 4th grade.

✓ Yes, I did. The first time I went to the neighborhood was when I was in 4th grade.

'Neighboring' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun here. The correct noun is 'neighborhood'. Also, the sentence needs to be split for clarity and correct structure.

× It was interesting because I saw many different books and I enjoyed a great new story and learning new things.

✓ It was interesting because I saw many different books and enjoyed great new stories and learned new things.

'A great new story' should be plural 'great new stories' to match 'many different books'. Also, parallel structure requires 'enjoyed' and 'learned' to be consistent verbs.

× I'm not very sure about Chinese case, but I can tell you about case in Vietnam.

✓ I'm not very sure about the Chinese case, but I can tell you about the case in Vietnam.

The noun 'case' needs the definite article 'the' before it to specify the particular case being discussed.

× Many children here often go to the library because there are many small libraries near residential areas.

✓ Many children here often go to the library because there are many small libraries near residential areas.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× They might to read books and do their homework.

✓ They might read books and do their homework.

After modal verbs like 'might', the base form of the verb is used without 'to'. So 'might to read' should be 'might read'.

× Rare we can.

✓ Rarely can we.

The phrase 'Rare we can' is incorrect. The adverb 'rarely' should be placed before the auxiliary verb for correct sentence structure: 'Rarely can we.'