图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý chính rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, "sometimes" được lặp lại nhiều lần gây cảm giác không mạch lạc. Bạn cũng nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment for studying. Moreover, it helps me relax and take a break from social media and electronic devices, which makes me feel more comfortable and satisfied.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "helped me gained" nên là "helped me gain". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm bằng cách sử dụng từ nối để làm rõ ý và tránh lặp từ.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually look for books or magazines to read. Not only do I read for enjoyment, but it also helps me feel relaxed and gain more knowledge about the world.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ cho phù hợp (ví dụ "my parents go" nên là "my parents went"), tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài dòng, bạn nên cô đọng ý chính hơn.

範例: When I was a child, my parents often worked long hours and felt exhausted, so they sent me to the library. There, I usually read comics and magazines, which kept me entertained.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "exam". Ngoài ra, bạn nên chú ý số nhiều/số ít trong câu cuối.

範例: I believe education in China is very competitive, so children often go to libraries to study and prepare for exams. Libraries offer a quiet environment and many useful resources that help students improve their knowledge and perform better in school and exams.

× Well, when I go to library, I usually find some books or magazines to read.

✓ Well, when I go to the library, I usually find some books or magazines to read.

In English, the definite article 'the' is used before singular and plural nouns when the speaker is referring to a specific or known item. Here, 'library' is a specific place, so 'the' is required before 'library'.

× Not only I read it for fun, it also makes me feel more comfortable and it helped me gained more knowledge about the world.

✓ Not only do I read it for fun, it also makes me feel more comfortable and it helped me gain more knowledge about the world.

The phrase 'Not only I read it' is incorrect; it should be 'Not only do I read it' to form a correct negative inversion. Also, 'helped me gained' is incorrect because after 'helped me' the base form of the verb 'gain' should be used, not the past tense 'gained'.

× Well, when I was a child, my parents go to work a lot, so my parents didn't have time for me and sometimes they feel so hectic and sometimes they feel exhausted.

✓ Well, when I was a child, my parents went to work a lot, so my parents didn't have time for me and sometimes they felt so hectic and sometimes they felt exhausted.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the time frame is in the past ('when I was a child'), the verbs should be in the past tense: 'go' should be 'went' and 'feel' should be 'felt'.

× So they sent me to the libraries.

✓ So they sent me to the library.

When referring to a specific place where one goes regularly or habitually, the singular form with the definite article 'the library' is used rather than the plural 'libraries'.

× And when I get to libraries, I often read some comics or some magazine.

✓ And when I get to the library, I often read some comics or some magazines.

Again, 'libraries' should be 'the library' to refer to a specific place. Also, 'some magazine' is incorrect because 'magazine' is countable and plural form 'magazines' should be used after 'some'.

× Well, I think education in China is very competitive and tough, so children often go to a library to study and prepare for their exam.

✓ Well, I think education in China is very competitive and tough, so children often go to the library to study and prepare for their exams.

When referring to a specific place generally known, 'the library' is used instead of 'a library'. Also, 'their exam' should be plural 'their exams' because 'children' is plural and each may have multiple exams.