图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và thiếu hiệu quả. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer buying books and reading them at home. Reading makes me feel comfortable and safe, so I enjoy spending time with my books.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I usually go to the library to borrow books, especially adventure stories, which I find very exciting. Also, I enjoy spending time there with my friends because it is a quiet and comfortable place.

建議: Bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp về thì và số nhiều, câu trả lời cũng không rõ ràng và có sự lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

範例: When I was a kid, I preferred playing with my friends rather than going to the library because I found it a bit boring. I enjoyed toys and watching television more since they were more exciting for me.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự chính xác trong cách diễn đạt. Bạn nên tránh nói không chắc chắn quá nhiều, sử dụng số nhiều đúng và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I am Vietnamese, so I don't know much about Chinese kids. However, I believe many of them enjoy going to the library to study and read books because they are very hardworking.

× I like to buy buy many books to my home and I stay at home to read it all the time and and books help me to feel more safe and I really like it.

✓ I like to buy many books to my home and I stay at home to read them all the time and the books help me to feel safer and I really like it.

The word 'books' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should be 'them' instead of 'it'. Also, 'more safe' should be 'safer' to correctly use the comparative form of the adjective. Repetition of 'buy' and 'and' should be avoided for clarity.

× the favorite types of books I like is about the interesting adventure.

✓ the favorite types of books I like are about interesting adventures.

The subject 'types' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'adventure' should be plural to match 'types' and 'interesting' does not need 'the' before it.

× I always like to hang out with my friends in the library and it's.

✓ I always like to hang out with my friends in the library.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and it's' which is incomplete and unclear. Removing 'and it's' corrects the sentence structure.

× To be honest, when I were a kid I like to hang out with my friends than go to the library.

✓ To be honest, when I was a kid I liked to hang out with my friends rather than go to the library.

The past tense of 'be' for singular first person is 'was', not 'were'. Also, 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. 'Than' should be 'rather than' for correct comparison.

× I think library is a little bit bored and I I think toys and television is more exciting and interesting for my.

✓ I think the library is a little bit boring and I think toys and television are more exciting and interesting for me.

'Library' is singular and needs the definite article 'the'. 'Bored' is an adjective describing a person, 'boring' describes the thing causing boredom. 'Toys and television' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. 'My' should be 'me' as the object of the preposition.

× Actually I am a Vietnamese kid so I don't know about a lot of Chinese kids, but I think they are really smart person so they really like to go to the library to find out more books to study.

✓ Actually, I am a Vietnamese kid so I don't know about many Chinese kids, but I think they are really smart people so they really like to go to the library to find more books to study.

'A lot of' is informal and 'many' is more appropriate here. 'Person' should be plural 'people' to match 'they'. 'Find out more books' is incorrect; 'find more books' is correct.