图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'I were' nên là 'I was', 'beside' nên là 'besides', và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: No, I don't go to the library often now. When I was a university student, I used to visit libraries regularly. However, I don't have much free time these days, and there isn't a library near my house, so I rarely go.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'use library' nên là 'use the library', 'can easier to focus' nên là 'can focus more easily'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và lặp lại, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: I usually use the library to study because it is quiet and free from distractions, which helps me focus on my assignments. Also, I often meet my friends there to study together and discuss difficult exercises from school.

建議: Bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi phát âm và từ vựng như 'fighting new books' nên là 'finding new books'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, chính xác để thể hiện ý tốt hơn.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I loved reading books, so my dad often took me to the library on weekends. I enjoyed finding new books and stories there, and it was a good place to concentrate on my homework.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'constituents' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy và chọn từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng.

範例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a quiet place ideal for studying and doing homework. Also, schools usually encourage students to use the library to improve their concentration and learning.

× Actually no. I used to go to the libraries when I were a student at universities, but now I don't have more time.

✓ Actually no. I used to go to the libraries when I was a student at university, but now I don't have much time.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was'. Also, 'universities' is plural but contextually it should be singular 'university' to match the singular 'a student'. Additionally, 'more time' is incorrect here; 'much time' is appropriate for negative sentences.

× Actually no. I used to go to the libraries when I were a student at universities, but now I don't have more time.

✓ Actually no. I used to go to the library when I was a student at university, but now I don't have much time.

The plural 'libraries' and 'universities' should be singular 'library' and 'university' to match the singular subject 'a student'.

× I don't have much free time to visit the library and beside there isn't any libraries conveniently located near my house.

✓ I don't have much free time to visit the library and besides there aren't any libraries conveniently located near my house.

'Beside' is incorrect; the correct word is 'besides' meaning 'in addition'. Also, 'isn't any libraries' is incorrect because 'libraries' is plural; it should be 'aren't any libraries'.

× I don't have much free time to visit the library and beside there isn't any libraries conveniently located near my house.

✓ I don't have much free time to visit the library and besides there aren't any libraries conveniently located near my house.

'Libraries' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'aren't' instead of singular 'isn't'.

× So that's reason I have to change to move to.

✓ So that's the reason I have to move.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Change to move to' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'So that's the reason I have to move.'

× Well I use library to study because it's a quiet and free from distractions so I can easier to focus on my assignments and protect here.

✓ Well, I use the library to study because it's quiet and free from distractions, so I can focus more easily on my assignments and projects here.

'Use library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'It's a quiet' should be 'it's quiet' (no article). 'Easier to focus' is incorrect; it should be 'focus more easily'. 'Protect here' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'projects here'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× And besides I can meet my friend to learn together and discuss some cut up difficult exercise at home at school as well.

✓ And besides, I can meet my friends to learn together and discuss some difficult exercises from home or school as well.

'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' for general meaning. 'Cut up difficult exercise' is incorrect; likely meant 'difficult exercises'. 'At home at school' is awkward; 'from home or school' is clearer. Comma after 'besides' is needed.

× Yes I did. When I was a kid I loved reading books so that is the reason my dad usually took me to the library at the weekend in here.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I loved reading books, so that is the reason my dad usually took me to the library on weekends here.

Commas are needed after introductory phrases. 'At the weekend in here' is awkward; 'on weekends here' is more natural. The tense is correct.

× Yes I did. When I was a kid I loved reading books so that is the reason my dad usually took me to the library at the weekend in here.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I loved reading books, so that is the reason my dad usually took me to the library on weekends here.

'At the weekend' is British English but 'on weekends' is more common in general American English. 'In here' is incorrect; 'here' suffices.

× I I love fighting new books and stories and it is a good place to focus on my homework.

✓ I love finding new books and stories, and it is a good place to focus on my homework.

'Fighting' is incorrect; the intended word is 'finding'. Also, repeated 'I' is a typo.

× I'm not sure, but I think libraries are very popular for studying and doing homework for students or research for researchers.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think libraries are very popular for studying and doing homework for students or for research by researchers.

The phrase 'research for researchers' is awkward; 'research by researchers' or simply 'research' is better.

× And maybe many schools will encourage students to come to the library to study.

✓ And maybe many schools encourage students to come to the library to study.

'Will encourage' is future tense; 'encourage' present tense fits better for general statements.

× And it's also a quiet environment and a good idea for constituents. Contains concentration for students.

✓ And it's also a quiet environment and a good place for concentration for students.

'Constituents' is incorrect; likely meant 'concentration'. The sentence 'Contains concentration for students' is incorrect; it should be 'a good place for concentration for students'.