图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use simple and correct tenses and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I used to go to the library when I was a child, but now I don't because of my daily work.' This is more natural and clear.

範例: I used to go to the library when I was a child, but now I don't because I am busy with my daily work.

建議: Try to complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to organize your ideas. For example, say 'When I go to the library, I usually look for the newest and most interesting books, especially those related to my specialty.'

範例: When I go to the library, I usually look for the newest and most interesting books, especially those related to my specialty.

建議: Use more natural expressions and correct word order. For example, say 'Yes, I did. I enjoyed my time there because it was interesting and fun.'

範例: Yes, I did. I enjoyed my time there because it was interesting and fun.

建議: Try to give a more complete answer even if you are not sure. You can say 'I'm not sure, but I think some Chinese kids go to the library to study or read books.'

範例: I'm not sure, but I think some Chinese kids go to the library to study or read books.

× Actually, when I was a child, I was going to the library, but now I didn't, I didn't go to it.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I used to go to the library, but now I don't go to it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was going' for a habitual past action and 'didn't' for present negative. 'Used to go' correctly expresses a past habitual action, and 'don't go' is the correct present tense negative form.

× I I don't go to the library because of my daily, daily, daily works.

✓ I don't go to the library because of my daily work.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or job duties. Also, repeating 'daily' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× OK, when I go to the library, I search about, I will look at look at the most interested and the most interested and the most new books in there and in my in my specialty which is.

✓ OK, when I go to the library, I search for and look at the most interesting and the newest books there, especially in my specialty.

The phrase 'search about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'search for'. 'Most interested' should be 'most interesting' to describe books. 'Most new' should be 'newest' as the superlative form. Also, the sentence was repetitive and incomplete, so it was clarified.

× Yes, I did, and it was the most interesting time and most funny time I was spending.

✓ Yes, I did, and it was the most interesting and funniest time I spent.

The phrase 'most funny' should be 'funniest' as the superlative adjective. 'I was spending' is awkward here; simple past 'I spent' is more appropriate to describe a completed past event.