图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more direct. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' correctly to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy and ensure your vocabulary fits the context naturally.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place without distractions. I prefer borrowing books instead of buying them. Also, libraries provide useful resources like digital media. Sometimes, I attend events hosted there.

建議: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure and word choice need improvement. Use correct prepositions and avoid awkward phrases like 'sit lonely'. Use linking words such as 'and' or 'also' properly to connect ideas. Keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: Usually, I sit alone in the library and read books and articles. If I find useful materials, I borrow them to study at home. Also, I like studying there because the environment is quiet and peaceful.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use simple sentences and correct verb tenses. Avoid repetition and unclear words like 'book books' or 'interesting deal'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

範例: Yes, my school had a library and we had a regular time to visit it. I liked that time because I could borrow books and read interesting stories at home. Also, there were some useful articles I could read there. That's why I enjoyed going to the library as a child.

建議: Your answer has some good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need correction. Use plural forms correctly and avoid awkward phrases like 'advanced from us'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Try to express your opinion clearly and politely.

範例: I don't think Chinese students often go to the library because they have advanced technology and easy access to the Internet. They can find ebooks and other materials online, so they may not need to visit the library frequently.

× Yes, I frequently visit the libraries for my studies because it's a place where there's no distraction as well as I like the borrowing books rather than buying them.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library for my studies because it's a place where there are no distractions, and I like borrowing books rather than buying them.

The word 'libraries' should be singular 'library' to match 'a place'. Also, 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' because it refers to multiple possible distractions. 'The borrowing books' is incorrect; it should be 'borrowing books' without 'the'.

× Moreover, libraries are helping us with our sources such as digital media and also I intend the events which they have been hosted.

✓ Moreover, libraries help us with our resources such as digital media, and I also attend the events which they host.

'Are helping' is less appropriate here; simple present 'help' is better for habitual actions. 'Our sources' should be 'our resources'. 'I intend the events' is incorrect; it should be 'I attend the events'. 'Which they have been hosted' is incorrect passive form; 'which they host' is correct.

× Well, I often sit lonely in the library, reading the books as well as some of the articles, and after that, if I like to take some other sources at home, I am going to borrow them.

✓ Well, I often sit alone in the library, reading books as well as some articles, and after that, if I want to take some other resources home, I borrow them.

'Sit lonely' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'sit alone'. 'The books' and 'some of the articles' should be 'books' and 'some articles' as general references. 'If I like to take' should be 'if I want to take'. 'Sources' is better replaced with 'resources'. 'I am going to borrow them' is better as 'I borrow them' for habitual action.

× And moreover, I also like to sit and study there because there is a quiet environment.

✓ Moreover, I also like to sit and study there because the environment is quiet.

'There is a quiet environment' is grammatically correct but unnatural; 'the environment is quiet' is more natural. Also, 'And moreover' is redundant; 'Moreover' alone suffices.

× Yes, there was a library in the school and there was a regular period for visiting there.

✓ Yes, there was a library in the school and there was a regular period for visiting it.

'Visiting there' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'visiting it' referring to the library.

× And I like that period because I want to borrow some of the book books or interesting deal which I like to read at home as well as there is also some of the trusting articles which I can read there.

✓ And I liked that period because I wanted to borrow some books or interesting stories which I liked to read at home, as well as some trustworthy articles which I could read there.

'Book books' is a repetition error; should be 'books'. 'Interesting deal' is incorrect; likely meant 'interesting stories'. 'There is also some of the trusting articles' should be 'some trustworthy articles'. Also, tense should be past to match 'when I was a kid' context.

× That's why I like the library when I was good.

✓ That's why I liked the library when I was young.

'Like' should be past tense 'liked' to match past time. 'When I was good' is incorrect; likely meant 'when I was young'.

× Well, I don't think that Chinese student go to library because they're very advanced from us as well as they're having the Internet which can help them to know about the ebooks as well as about the material which they require.

✓ Well, I don't think that Chinese students go to the library because they are more advanced than us, and they have the Internet which can help them learn about ebooks as well as the materials they require.

'Chinese student' should be plural 'Chinese students'. 'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. 'They're having the Internet' is incorrect; 'they have the Internet' is correct. 'Advanced from us' should be 'more advanced than us'. 'Help them to know about' is better as 'help them learn about'. 'Material' should be plural 'materials'.

× So I don't think that Chinese school kids often go to library.

✓ So I don't think that Chinese school kids often go to the library.

'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.