图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ như "spend" nên là "spent", và "going to library" nên là "going to the library". Bạn cũng nên tránh dùng những cụm từ không rõ nghĩa như "catch up already". Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách khi nói về quá khứ.

範例: When I was at university, I spent a lot of time studying in the library. However, now that I have a full-time job, I only visit the library occasionally on weekends to catch up on reading.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu câu chủ đề rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "Do in the library" không hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, câu cuối có sự lặp từ và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ.

範例: In the library, I usually spend most of my time reviewing my assessments and studying. Additionally, I look for special resources that are only available in my university library, such as materials from our partner institution, Cambridge.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ khi nói về quá khứ, ví dụ "prefer" nên là "preferred", "spend" nên là "spent". Câu "I found outdoor activities I worked more exciting" không rõ nghĩa và cần sửa lại. Hãy cố gắng viết câu rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp.

範例: When I was a kid, I preferred playing with my friends in the neighborhood because I found outdoor activities more exciting and enjoyable than going to the library. At that time, I was not interested in reading books, so I usually spent my free time running around and playing games outside.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, cấu trúc câu rời rạc và không liên quan trực tiếp đến câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những câu không liên quan như "visit celebrities". Hãy tập trung vào ý chính và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: As a Vietnamese citizen, I am not sure about Chinese children, but in Vietnam, many kids prefer spending time playing with their friends rather than going to the library. For example, when I was young, I usually played outside instead of reading in the library.

× When I was at university, I usually spend a lot of time going to library to study in the research.

✓ When I was at university, I usually spent a lot of time going to the library to study for research.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was at university'), so the verb 'spend' should be in the past tense 'spent'. Also, 'going to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Additionally, 'study in the research' is incorrect; it should be 'study for research' to express the purpose of studying.

× When I was at university, I usually spend a lot of time going to library to study in the research.

✓ When I was at university, I usually spent a lot of time going to the library to study for research.

The noun 'library' is a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× However, now that I have a full time job, I like the time to visit the library regularly, so I only go occasionally on weekends to catch up already.

✓ However, now that I have a full-time job, I like to visit the library regularly, so I only go occasionally on weekends to catch up.

The phrase 'I like the time to visit' is awkward; it should be 'I like to visit' to express preference. Also, 'full time' should be hyphenated as 'full-time' when used as an adjective. The word 'already' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× Do in the library.

✓ What do you do in the library?

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and auxiliary verb. It should be a question like 'What do you do in the library?' to make sense.

× I also look for special resources that are only available in the in my university library, such as materials from my university's partner, such as Cambridge.

✓ I also look for special resources that are only available in my university library, such as materials from my university's partner, Cambridge.

The phrase 'in the in my university library' contains a redundant 'the'. Also, 'such as' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the extra 'the' and the second 'such as' improves clarity.

× When I was a kid, I prefer playing with my friends in the neighborhood because I found outdoor activities I worked more exciting and enjoyable than going through the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I preferred playing with my friends in the neighborhood because I found outdoor activities more exciting and enjoyable than going to the library.

Since the sentence refers to the past ('When I was a kid'), the verb 'prefer' should be in the past tense 'preferred'. Also, 'going through the library' is incorrect; it should be 'going to the library'. The phrase 'I worked' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× At that time, I was not interested in reading books, so I usually spend my free time running around and playing games outside.

✓ At that time, I was not interested in reading books, so I usually spent my free time running around and playing games outside.

The phrase 'At that time' indicates past, so 'spend' should be in past tense 'spent' to maintain tense consistency.

× As a Vietnam citizen, I'm not sure if Chinese children of go to the library have in Vietnam, many kids prefer spend time playing.

✓ As a Vietnamese citizen, I'm not sure if Chinese children go to the library. In Vietnam, many kids prefer spending time playing.

'Vietnam' should be 'Vietnamese' to describe nationality. The phrase 'children of go to the library have in Vietnam' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'if Chinese children go to the library.' Also, 'prefer spend' should be 'prefer spending'.

× With their friends rather than visit celebrities.

✓ With their friends rather than visiting celebrities.

The phrase is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Also, 'visit celebrities' is likely incorrect in context; probably intended 'visiting the library' or similar. The preposition 'with' is correct, but the sentence needs restructuring.

× For example, when I want to try, I usually play with my friends instead of reading in the library.

✓ For example, when I want to relax, I usually play with my friends instead of reading in the library.

The phrase 'when I want to try' is unclear and incomplete. It should specify what is being tried, e.g., 'when I want to relax' or 'when I want to have fun' to make sense.