图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and detailed. Try to avoid repeating 'library' unnecessarily and add a reason or frequency to enrich your response. For example, you could say when or why you go there.

範例: Yes, I often visit the library in my hometown because it's a quiet place where I can focus on my studies.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'study in the library' multiple times. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about what you do there.

範例: I usually study there because it's very comfortable and quiet. Additionally, I often borrow books to help me complete my homework.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and provide specific details.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often went to the library because my mother recommended many books to me, so I borrowed a lot of them.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Avoid comparing groups without clear evidence and focus on giving a clear, logical answer. Use linking words to explain your opinion.

範例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit the library because they value education and like to study in a quiet environment.

× I usually study in the library because that place is the most comfortable for me to study at the library.

✓ I usually study in the library because that place is the most comfortable for me to study in.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'study' here. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to studying inside a place like a library.

× So I usually study there and check many books to solve this homework.

✓ So I usually study there and check many books to do this homework.

The verb 'solve' is not typically used with 'homework'. The correct verb is 'do' when referring to completing homework.

× I usually go to the library when I was a child.

✓ I usually went to the library when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past time 'when I was a child'. The verb should be in past tense 'went' to match the time frame.

× My mother often recommended to me a lot of books, so I often went to there and borrow many books.

✓ My mother often recommended a lot of books to me, so I often went there and borrowed many books.

The verb 'recommend' does not require 'to' before the indirect object when the indirect object follows the direct object. Also, 'went to there' is incorrect; it should be 'went there'. Additionally, 'borrow' should be in past tense 'borrowed' to match the past context.

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese children tend to study study harder than Japanese students.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese children tend to study harder than Japanese students.

The word 'study' is repeated twice by mistake. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× So we so they maybe go there.

✓ So they may go there.

The sentence contains redundant words 'we so' and awkward phrasing. Simplifying to 'So they may go there' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.