图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "I haven't such a free free time" ifadesi yerine "I don't have much free time" demek daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hatalarından kaçının.

範例: No, I don't often go to the library because I don't have much free time due to my internship.

建議: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime tekrarları var. "When I go to do a library" yerine "When I go to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "more affordable" ve "more cheaper" ifadeleri aynı anlama geldiği için ikisini birden kullanmak gereksiz. Bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually borrow reference books because they offer a wide range of materials that are more affordable than buying them online. Additionally, the library provides many resources such as magazines and academic journals.

建議: Cümlenizde zaman uyumu ve tekrar sorunları var. "I live in, I was, I lived in" gibi ifadeler karışıklık yaratıyor. Ayrıca, "Urban City" ifadesi daha açıklayıcı olabilir. Cümlenizi daha net ve akıcı hale getirmek için zamanları doğru kullanmalısınız.

範例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I lived in an urban area where there wasn't a library near my home.

建議: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. "are really have a really strict rules" ifadesi yanlış. Ayrıca, görüşünüzü daha net ve akıcı ifade etmelisiniz. Bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümlenizi geliştirebilirsiniz.

範例: I don't have specific information about this, but I believe that Chinese children have strict rules due to their traditions, and from my perspective, they often go to the library regularly.

× Well, I think that no, because in my it's because I haven't such a free free time, because I have a internship and furthermore.

✓ Well, I think no, because I don't have much free time since I have an internship, and furthermore.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. 'In my' is incomplete and unnecessary. 'I haven't such a free free time' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't have much free time'. Also, 'a internship' should be 'an internship' due to vowel sound. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× When I go to do a library, I usually get a reference books because they offer a wide range of materials that are more affordable than buying them online, and they're more cheaper.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually get reference books because they offer a wide range of materials that are more affordable than buying them online, and they're cheaper.

The phrase 'go to do a library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. 'A reference books' is incorrect because 'books' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'more cheaper' is redundant; 'cheaper' alone is correct.

× No, I couldn't go to the library in my childhood because I live in, I was, I lived in Urban City and there wasn't any library by our house, by our neighborhood.

✓ No, I couldn't go to the library in my childhood because I lived in Urban City and there wasn't any library near our house, in our neighborhood.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions: 'by our house' and 'by our neighborhood' should be 'near our house' and 'in our neighborhood'. Also, the tense confusion 'I live in, I was, I lived in' is corrected to 'I lived in' to match past tense context.

× Well, I don't have specific information about this topic, but I believe that Chinese kids are really have a really strict rules from their traditions and from my perspective they regularly go to the library.

✓ Well, I don't have specific information about this topic, but I believe that Chinese kids really have strict rules from their traditions and, from my perspective, they regularly go to the library.

The phrase 'are really have' is incorrect; it should be 'really have'. Also, 'a really strict rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and should not have 'a'. Commas are added for clarity.