图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct verb forms and articles. For example, say 'I don't often go to the library because I am not interested in reading books or theories.'

範例: I don't often go to the library because I am not very interested in reading books or academic theories.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear vocabulary ('fairy tickles' should be 'fairy tales'). Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. For example, say 'When I go to the library, I usually read fairy tale books because they make me feel comfortable and happy.'

範例: When I go to the library, I usually read fairy tale books because they help me relax and enjoy my time there.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, say 'When I was at school, I often went to the library to find answers because I couldn't afford to buy books. Since book prices were high, the library was a good resource for me.'

範例: When I was at school, I often went to the library to find answers because I couldn't afford to buy books. Since book prices were high, the library was a good resource for me.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and clearer sentence structures. For example, say 'It depends on the children. Those who are interested in books and library activities usually go, but children who prefer other activities like music are less likely to visit the library.'

範例: It depends on the children. Those who are interested in books and library activities usually go, but children who prefer other activities like music are less likely to visit the library.

× I haven't visit library.

✓ I haven't visited the library.

The verb 'visit' should be in the past participle form 'visited' after 'haven't' (have not) to form the present perfect tense correctly. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place.

× I haven't visit library.

✓ I haven't visited the library.

In English, 'library' as a specific place requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.

× when I go to library I usually read books related with fairy tickles

✓ when I go to the library I usually read books related to fairy tales

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, the preposition 'related with' is incorrect; it should be 'related to'. Additionally, 'fairy tickles' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'fairy tales'.

× read books related with fairy tickles

✓ read books related to fairy tales

The correct preposition to use with 'related' is 'to', not 'with'. Also, 'fairy tickles' is incorrect; the correct term is 'fairy tales'.

× I when I read these books I feel more comfortable and enjoyable.

✓ When I read these books, I feel more comfortable and enjoy myself.

The sentence has a misplaced 'I' and uses 'enjoyable' incorrectly. 'Enjoyable' is an adjective describing something that gives enjoyment, but here the student wants to express their feeling, so 'enjoy myself' is appropriate. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× I usually go to library for finding my answers

✓ I usually go to the library to find my answers

The phrase 'for finding' is incorrect; the infinitive 'to find' should be used after 'go'. Also, 'library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I usually go to library for finding my answers

✓ I usually go to the library to find my answers

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× at that time I cannot afford the books.

✓ at that time I could not afford the books.

Since the sentence refers to a past time ('at that time'), the modal verb 'cannot' should be in the past form 'could not' to maintain tense consistency.

× Books prices are very high.

✓ Book prices are very high.

The noun 'books' is plural, but when used as an adjective to describe 'prices', it should be singular 'book'.

× So when I have any questions out of the study I usually go to library and find the answer.

✓ So when I have any questions outside of my studies, I usually go to the library and find the answers.

The phrase 'out of the study' is incorrect; 'outside of my studies' is more appropriate. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Answer' should be plural 'answers' to match 'any questions'.

× If they are have an interest in the books and any other activities that are related with libraries

✓ If they have an interest in books and any other activities that are related to libraries

The phrase 'are have' is incorrect; it should be 'have'. Also, 'related with' should be 'related to'. The definite article 'the' before 'books' is unnecessary here.

× If the children interest have in other activities like in music so they are less likely to go there.

✓ If the children have an interest in other activities like music, they are less likely to go there.

The phrase 'children interest have' is incorrect; it should be 'children have an interest'. The word 'so' is unnecessary and breaks sentence flow. Also, 'like in music' should be 'like music'.