图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library during my free time. I usually read books, work on my projects, and sometimes chat with my friends there.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "umm" và "uh". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ.

範例: In the library, I usually read books, work on my projects, and sometimes talk with my friends. I believe the library provides a good environment to improve my communication skills and build relationships.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

範例: Yes, I enjoyed going to the library as a child because I loved reading books. It was a relaxing place where I could learn new things about social issues.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như "social instrument" và cải thiện tính logic của câu.

範例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a peaceful place to relax and learn new things from books. They like to focus on reading while they are there.

× I usually spend time on reading, working on my project and having a conversation with my friend all the free time.

✓ I usually spend time reading, working on my project, and having conversations with my friends during my free time.

The phrase 'spend time on reading' is incorrect; 'spend time' is followed directly by the gerund without 'on'. Also, 'having a conversation with my friend all the free time' is awkward; it should be 'having conversations with my friends during my free time' to express habitual actions and correct plural usage.

× I usually spend time on reading book, working on my projects and having a conversation with my friend.

✓ I usually spend time reading books, working on my projects, and having conversations with my friends.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'spend time on reading book' should be 'spend time reading books'. Also, 'having a conversation with my friend' should be pluralized to 'conversations with my friends' to indicate habitual actions.

× I feel the library is a good environment to improve my in communication skills.

✓ I feel the library is a good environment to improve my communication skills.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'communication skills'. The correct phrase is 'improve my communication skills' without 'in'.

× Communication skills and umm the and uh ability to building the relationship which.

✓ Communication skills and the ability to build relationships are important.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Ability to building' should be 'ability to build', and the sentence needs a main verb and clear structure to be complete.

× Sure, I really enjoyed Go to Library when I was a child because my hobby is because my hobby is a reading book.

✓ Sure, I really enjoyed going to the library when I was a child because my hobby was reading books.

'Go to Library' should be in gerund form 'going to the library' after 'enjoyed'. Also, 'my hobby is because my hobby is a reading book' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'my hobby was reading books' to match past tense and correct article usage.

× So I usually find the library to relaxing and explore news knowledge about social issues.

✓ So I usually find the library relaxing and explore new knowledge about social issues.

'Find the library to relaxing' is incorrect; it should be 'find the library relaxing'. Also, 'news knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'new knowledge'.

× Yes, Chinese kids are supposed to peaceful place like library to relax and explore new social instrument by the book.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids are supposed to go to peaceful places like libraries to relax and explore new social topics through books.

The phrase 'are supposed to peaceful place' is incorrect; it should be 'are supposed to go to peaceful places'. 'Social instrument by the book' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'social topics through books' is more appropriate.

× Even they will want to keep focusing by the book in the library.

✓ They even want to keep focusing on the book in the library.

The phrase 'focusing by the book' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' as in 'focusing on the book'.