图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda təbii və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin. "I don't prefer to go to libraries" kimi ifadələr yerinə daha sadə və aydın ifadələr seçin. Məsələn, cavabınızı qısa və konkret saxlayın, əlavə olaraq səbəbləri də izah edin. Cümlələrinizdə təkrarları azaldın və daha düzgün qrammatik quruluşlara diqqət yetirin.

範例: I don't often go to the library because I have a large collection of books at home. So, when I want to read, I usually pick a book from my own room.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha səlis və əlaqəli etmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin. Məsələn, "because", "so", "therefore" kimi sözlər cavabınızı daha məntiqli edər. Həmçinin, cümlə quruluşunu sadə və aydın saxlayın, təkrar ifadələrdən qaçının.

範例: When I go to the library, I usually choose books that we don't have at home and start reading them. Since libraries are quiet, I can concentrate well, so I often do my homework there.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə zaman formalarına diqqət yetirin və təkrar ifadələrdən qaçının. Məsələn, "he always took me with him" daha düzgün ifadədir. Cavabınızı daha qısa və aydın edin, əlavə məlumat verərkən keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin.

範例: Yes, I went to the library a lot as a child, especially with my dad because he loved books. He always took me with him when he went there.

建議: Cavabınızda qeyri-müəyyən ifadələrdən qaçının və fikrinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. "Weird question" kimi ifadələrdən istifadə etməyin. Cümlələrinizi daha sadə və düzgün qrammatik quruluşda qurun. Mümkünsə, fikrinizi dəstəkləyən səbəblər verin.

範例: I am not sure about Chinese children, but I think they often go to libraries because education is very important in their culture.

× we have a a huge room that fulfilled these books

✓ we have a huge room that is filled with these books

The sentence contains a repeated article 'a a' which is incorrect. Also, 'fulfilled these books' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'is filled with these books' to indicate the room contains the books.

× when I need to or when I want to read a book, I go that room and choose books from there

✓ when I need to or want to read a book, I go to that room and choose books from there

The phrase 'go that room' is missing the preposition 'to' which is necessary after 'go' when indicating a destination. Also, 'when I need to or when I want to' can be simplified to 'when I need to or want to' for better flow.

× I usually choose a book that we don't have at home and start to read that

✓ I usually choose a book that we don't have at home and start reading it

The phrase 'start to read that' is awkward; 'start reading it' is more natural. Also, 'that' as a pronoun is less appropriate here than 'it' referring to the book.

× But mostly I libraries are silent places

✓ But mostly, libraries are silent places

The original sentence has an incorrect word order with 'I libraries'. The subject should be 'libraries' without 'I'. Adding a comma after 'mostly' improves clarity.

× he always take me with himself

✓ he always took me with him

The verb 'take' should be in past tense 'took' to match 'always' in past context. Also, 'with himself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'with him'.

× he always take me with himself, took me with himself

✓ he always took me with him

The sentence repeats the phrase with incorrect and correct forms. The correct form is 'he always took me with him'.

× I don't have any idea what Chinese children

✓ I don't have any idea about Chinese children

The phrase 'have any idea what Chinese children' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'have any idea about Chinese children' to indicate lack of knowledge regarding them.

× their education system is very dedication system is so crucial for them

✓ their education system is very dedicated and crucial for them

The phrase 'very dedication system is so crucial' is grammatically incorrect. 'Dedication' is a noun; the adjective form 'dedicated' should be used. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.