图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'we can looking' nên là 'we can look'. Bạn cũng nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I don't often go to the library because nowadays, smartphones allow me to access a lot of information easily.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Although I don't often go to the library because I find reading books boring, when I do visit, I usually read comic books.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu có phần lặp từ và cấu trúc chưa mạch lạc. Hãy chú ý sắp xếp câu hợp lý và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, of course. When I was a kid, I would always go to the library on weekends to read comic books or buy study materials for school.

建議: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không cung cấp thông tin. Bạn nên cố gắng đưa ra ý kiến hoặc dự đoán dựa trên hiểu biết của mình để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

範例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids visit libraries regularly to study and read books.

× We have smartphone, we can, we can looking for a lot of information in in their smartphone.

✓ We have smartphones, we can look for a lot of information on our smartphones.

The noun 'smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to match the context of general use. Also, 'looking' should be corrected to 'look' to fit the modal verb 'can'. The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on' is the correct preposition for using a smartphone. Additionally, 'their' should be 'our' to match the subject 'we'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× We have smartphone, we can, we can looking for a lot of information in in their smartphone.

✓ We have smartphones, we can look for a lot of information on our smartphones.

After the modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'looking' should be corrected to 'look'.

× We have smartphone, we can, we can looking for a lot of information in in their smartphone.

✓ We have smartphones, we can look for a lot of information on our smartphones.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition when referring to using a smartphone is 'on'.

× We have smartphone, we can, we can looking for a lot of information in in their smartphone.

✓ We have smartphones, we can look for a lot of information on our smartphones.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect because the subject is 'we'; it should be 'our' to maintain agreement.

× I think reading book is a boring things, but when I was a try I have go to the library a lot.

✓ I think reading books is boring, but when I was a child I used to go to the library a lot.

'Reading book' should be plural 'reading books' to indicate general activity. 'A boring things' is incorrect; 'boring' is an adjective and 'things' is plural, so it should be 'boring' alone or 'boring things' without 'a'. Also, 'when I was a try' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. 'I have go' is incorrect; the past tense 'I used to go' fits better here.

× I think reading book is a boring things, but when I was a try I have go to the library a lot.

✓ I think reading books is boring, but when I was a child I used to go to the library a lot.

The phrase 'I have go' is incorrect; the past tense form 'I used to go' is appropriate to describe habitual past actions.

× I think reading book is a boring things, but when I was a try I have go to the library a lot.

✓ I think reading books is boring, but when I was a child I used to go to the library a lot.

The phrase 'a boring things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'boring things' or simply 'boring'.

× I when when I come to there I will read the comic books.

✓ When I come there, I will read comic books.

The phrase 'come to there' is incorrect; 'come there' is the correct form. Also, 'the comic books' can be simplified to 'comic books' unless referring to specific ones.

× I when when I come to there I will read the comic books.

✓ When I come there, I will read comic books.

The preposition 'to' before 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'come there' is the correct expression.

× When I was a kid I always at the weekend I would always go to the library to read the comic books or buy something for my study in the in the school.

✓ When I was a kid, I would always go to the library on weekends to read comic books or buy something for my studies at school.

The phrase 'always at the weekend' should be 'always on weekends'. 'For my study' should be 'for my studies'. 'In the in the school' is redundant and should be 'at school'.

× When I was a kid I always at the weekend I would always go to the library to read the comic books or buy something for my study in the in the school.

✓ When I was a kid, I would always go to the library on weekends to read comic books or buy something for my studies at school.

'The comic books' can be simplified to 'comic books' unless referring to specific ones. Also, 'my study' should be plural 'my studies' to refer to academic work in general.