列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding repeated words and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time by preventing me from wandering around looking for items.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to organise your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Generally, I don't make a written list for my work because I plan my tasks mentally. For example, I know what I need to do in the morning, afternoon, and evening, so I follow this mental schedule throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious. Instead, they prefer to organise their tasks mentally, which helps them know what to do next without writing anything down.

建議: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, unlike paper which I might lose or forget at home. Using my phone also helps me keep my lists organised and easily accessible.

× Yes, when I when I'm going to shopping, I usually make sure that I make a shopping list so that it can enable me not to forget anything, anything or any important in any important shopping that I'm supposed to buy.

✓ Yes, when I'm going shopping, I usually make sure that I make a shopping list so that it can enable me not to forget anything important in any shopping that I'm supposed to do.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The correct form is 'going shopping'. Also, 'any important in any important shopping' is redundant and unclear; it should be 'anything important in any shopping'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And also it makes it easy for me to pick up some stuff in supermarket instead of going round looking for other stuff.

✓ And also it makes it easy for me to pick up some stuff in the supermarket instead of going around looking for other stuff.

The phrase 'going round' should be 'going around' to correctly use the gerund form with the preposition. Also, 'in supermarket' requires the definite article 'the' before 'supermarket' for correct usage.

× Like when I woke up in the morning, I know that by morning I'm supposed to do this, by afternoon I'm supposed to do this particular thing and by evening I'm done with it.

✓ Like when I wake up in the morning, I know that by morning I'm supposed to do this, by afternoon I'm supposed to do this particular thing and by evening I'm done with it.

The verb 'woke' is past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'wake' is appropriate. This maintains consistency in tense for habitual actions.

× So basically I don't list make a list for what I need to do at work, but I have it in my mind already plant.

✓ So basically I don't make a list for what I need to do at work, but I already have it planned in my mind.

The phrase 'list make a list' is incorrect word order; it should be 'make a list'. Also, 'have it in my mind already plant' is awkward and unclear; 'already have it planned in my mind' is the correct structure.

× Basically. Some people don't like making list becaused they figure out that it's tedious so they like working up with the plans like with their mental.

✓ Basically, some people don't like making lists because they find it tedious, so they prefer working with plans in their mind.

The phrase 'working up with the plans like with their mental' is incorrect. 'Working with plans in their mind' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. 'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'.

× Basically. Some people don't like making list becaused they figure out that it's tedious so they like working up with the plans like with their mental.

✓ Basically, some people don't like making lists because they find it tedious, so they prefer working with plans in their mind.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. This correction aligns with standard pluralisation rules.

× When I'm making a list of refunds on my phone because I know it's same and it's always with me compared to paper which I might have misplaced it or maybe forget it at home.

✓ I prefer making a list of refunds on my phone because I know it's the same and it's always with me compared to paper, which I might have misplaced or forgotten at home.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb. Starting with 'I prefer making' completes the sentence. Also, 'forget it' should be 'forgotten' to match the past participle form after 'might have'. 'It's same' should be 'it's the same' for correct article usage.

× But As for my phone I have it with me and also it make it more organized with phone because I will still record everything that I will need and.

✓ But as for my phone, I have it with me and it also makes things more organised because I can record everything that I need.

The pronoun 'it' is used ambiguously; 'makes things more organised' clarifies the subject. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity and correctness.