列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and give specific reasons. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me control my spending and remember everything I need to buy.

建議: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Directly answer the question by stating that you make study lists and explain how they help you improve. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Although I am a student, I always make study lists to organize my timetable. Since I started using lists, my study habits have improved significantly.

建議: Clarify your ideas and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence explaining why some people avoid lists, then support with reasons such as good memory or personal habits. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have good memories or prefer to rely on their own punctuality instead.

建議: Make your answer more natural and concise. Clearly state your preference and reasons, avoiding unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, unlike paper lists which can be easily lost.

× Yes, of course I make care I I always created checklist while I shopping because it gives it helps to already use the purchasing amount and it also helps to remember all the things but we have to buy.

✓ Yes, of course I always create a checklist while shopping because it helps to manage the purchasing amount and also helps to remember all the things we have to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'created' (past tense) and 'shopping' without proper verb form. The phrase 'while I shopping' should be 'while shopping' or 'when I shop' because 'shopping' here functions as a gerund. Also, 'make care' is incorrect; it should be 'make' or 'create' a checklist. The correction uses the present tense 'create' to match the habitual action and corrects the verb forms for clarity.

× Actually I am studying so I will I always make a list about my timetabled forever to study I I always make a study to enable that is adaptable for me.

✓ Actually, I am studying, so I always make a list of my timetable for studying. I always make a study plan that is adaptable for me.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms like 'timetabled forever' and 'make a study to enable that'. The phrase 'make a list about my timetabled forever to study' is unclear and incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses correct noun phrases and verb forms, such as 'make a list of my timetable' and 'make a study plan'.

× Since I started to use a list in the case of study there is maybe I'll go to improvement of far from the old Times Now I am.

✓ Since I started using a list for studying, I have improved a lot compared to before.

The original sentence misuses tense and structure, such as 'I'll go to improvement of far from the old Times'. The phrase 'started to use' is better as 'started using' for fluency. The correction uses present perfect 'have improved' to indicate ongoing improvement since the past action started, and simplifies the sentence for clarity.

× Seriously, some somehow, some many people how their own punctuality, but somewhere if a person have a good memory and I think I believe that he does need to make a list.

✓ Seriously, some people have their own punctuality, but if a person has a good memory, I believe he does not need to make a list.

The original sentence has pronoun errors like 'some many people how their own punctuality' which is unclear. Also, 'if a person have' should be 'if a person has' to agree in number. The correction fixes pronoun usage and subject-verb agreement for clarity and correctness.

× In this new generation world, I always prefer to make a list on my mobile phone bill 'cause wherever, wherever we go, we always take our mobile phone with hand.

✓ In this new generation world, I always prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because wherever we go, we always take our mobile phone in our hand.

The phrase 'on my mobile phone bill' is incorrect; it should be 'on my mobile phone'. Also, 'take our mobile phone with hand' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'in our hand'. The correction fixes these prepositional errors for natural English usage.

× But I don't think that everyone will take paper with on their hand while they're going outside.

✓ But I don't think that everyone will take paper in their hand while going outside.

The phrase 'take paper with on their hand' incorrectly uses prepositions 'with on'. The correct preposition is 'in' for holding something in one's hand. The correction removes the extra prepositions for grammatical accuracy.

× So I always prefer more Nugent technologies to to create an inventor.

✓ So I always prefer newer technologies to create a list.

The original sentence uses 'Nugent' which seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'newer' or 'urgent'. Also, 'to create an inventor' is incorrect; likely intended 'to create an inventory' or 'list'. The correction assumes 'newer technologies' and 'create a list' for clarity and correct pronoun and noun usage.