列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add a supporting detail using linking words. Keep your answer natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

建議: Your answer lacks coherence and contains many errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences natural.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for work because I have a good memory. However, I understand that lists can be helpful for organising tasks.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Provide a direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Use relevant vocabulary and avoid repetition.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, which they believe is sufficient for remembering tasks.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your preference.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that help me organise my tasks easily, and I find writing on paper inconvenient.

× He actually be we will do list for shopping.

✓ He actually said we will make a list for shopping.

The original sentence uses 'be' incorrectly and has unclear structure. The verb 'be' should be replaced with 'said' to convey reported speech correctly. Also, 'do list' is incorrect; 'make a list' is the proper collocation.

× If you use list that will be good for you a shopping that will help you.

✓ If you use a list, that will be good for your shopping and will help you.

The sentence lacks articles and proper prepositions. 'A list' needs the article 'a', and 'for you a shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'for your shopping'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by connecting ideas with 'and'.

× Actually I'm not using that. List is fine.

✓ Actually, I'm not using that. The list is fine.

The noun 'list' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific list. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves readability.

× If you use list it will be work.

✓ If you use a list, it will work.

'Use list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'will be work' is incorrect; the correct form is 'will work' without 'be'.

× So but I don't want to use list because I have good memory power.

✓ But I don't want to use a list because I have a good memory.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'So but' which is incorrect. Also, 'list' needs the article 'a', and 'memory power' is better expressed as 'a good memory'.

× So I will do I will do shopping empty.

✓ So I will do shopping without a list.

The phrase 'shopping empty' is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely 'shopping without a list', which is clearer and grammatically correct.

× If you need time to spend full list, actually everybody has memory power.

✓ If you need time to spend on a full list, actually everybody has memory power.

The phrase 'spend full list' is incorrect; the verb 'spend' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to time spent on something. Also, 'a full list' needs the article 'a'.

× We can use that for shopping if you have memory bubble.

✓ We can use that for shopping if you have a good memory.

'Memory bubble' is incorrect and unclear. The intended phrase is likely 'a good memory'. Also, 'that' is vague but acceptable here.

× You can use in shopping and we have no.

✓ You can use it when shopping and we don't need a list.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Use in shopping' should be 'use it when shopping'. 'We have no' is incomplete; it should be 'we don't need a list' to complete the thought.

× I prefer mobile phone because it will be hard.

✓ I prefer the mobile phone because it is convenient.

The phrase 'it will be hard' is unclear and likely incorrect in context. 'Prefer mobile phone' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is improved by clarifying the reason for preference.

× For now we have a lot of app to save over least informed.

✓ Nowadays, we have a lot of apps to save our shopping list information.

'For now' is better expressed as 'Nowadays'. 'App' should be plural 'apps'. 'Save over least informed' is unclear; likely intended 'save our list information' or similar.

× I don't like to write in a paper, so it's very difficult for me.

✓ I don't like to write on paper, so it's very difficult for me.

The correct preposition with 'write' and 'paper' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect when referring to paper as a material.

× I always prefer mobile phone.

✓ I always prefer the mobile phone.

The noun 'mobile phone' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific device or category.