列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and give specific examples.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, I usually include groceries and household essentials on my list. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and save time during shopping.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how the list helps you with your work.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because some tasks are very important and I don't want to forget them. For example, I list my school assignments along with their deadlines. This helps me stay organized and complete my work on time.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. Provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and rarely forget things. Also, some prefer to keep their lists in their minds instead of writing them down or using their phones.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to express your preference clearly with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid filler words and finish your sentences.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily add or remove items whenever I need to, which makes it very convenient.

× Definitely whenever I go shopping I perpera list because it helps me.

✓ Definitely whenever I go shopping I prepare a list because it helps me.

The word 'perpera' is a misspelling of the verb 'prepare' in its base form. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× How to remember everything which I want to buy?

✓ It helps me remember everything that I want to buy.

The original sentence is a fragment and not a complete sentence. It lacks a subject and verb. Rewriting it as a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Oh, such as groceries and household essentials.

✓ For example, groceries and household essentials.

The phrase 'Oh, such as' is informal and awkward here. Using 'For example' is more appropriate to introduce examples.

× Moreover, I avoid forgetting anything important. When I make a list.

✓ Moreover, when I make a list, I avoid forgetting anything important.

The original sentence is split incorrectly, creating a fragment. Combining the two parts into one complete sentence corrects the structure.

× Certainly I make a list for my work, becaused some work are very important, so I do not like to forget my work.

✓ Certainly, I make a list for my work because some tasks are very important, so I do not like to forget them.

'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, 'work are' is incorrect; 'tasks are' or 'work is' should be used. 'My work' repeated is redundant; replacing with 'them' improves clarity.

× Such as my school work and I make a list to about my work like oh.

✓ For example, my school work, and I make a list about my tasks like, oh,

The phrase is awkward and incomplete. 'Work' is uncountable, so 'tasks' is better for countable items. Also, 'to about' is incorrect preposition usage.

× I make a list to about my work like oh.

✓ I make a list about my work, like, oh,

The phrase 'to about' is incorrect; only one preposition 'about' is needed here.

× What kind of work I do and words of deadline of my work.

✓ what kind of work I do and the deadlines of my tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. Adding 'the' before 'deadlines' and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people do not like making list because they have very great memory an never forget anything.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they have a very good memory and never forget anything.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match 'making'. 'An' is a typo for 'and'. 'Very great memory' is awkward; 'a very good memory' is more natural.

× Moreover. As some individuals will prepare the list in their mind.

✓ Moreover, some individuals prepare the list in their mind.

The original has a sentence fragment starting with 'As'. Combining into one sentence and removing 'As' corrects the structure.

× Instead of phone and.

✓ Instead of using a phone.

The phrase is incomplete and unclear. Completing it clarifies the meaning.

× Although both ways are good to make a list butter, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone bill 'cause, uh, I carry my mobile phone at all time in addition to this, so I can edit the items on the list when I need.

✓ Although both ways are good to make a list, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I carry it at all times. In addition, I can edit the items on the list whenever I need to.

'Butter' is a typo for 'better'. 'Bill' is unnecessary. 'At all time' should be 'at all times'. The sentence is long and awkward; splitting into two sentences improves clarity.

× And I add something and.

✓ I can also add items as needed.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rewriting it as a complete sentence clarifies the meaning.