列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhul haru chan jasle gardaa English natural ra effective hudaina. Tapai le 'saw' bhanda 'shop' bhannu parcha ra 'an' ko thau ma 'and' lekhnu parcha. 'Sopping' ko thau ma 'shopping' lekhnu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau, ra 'uh' jasto filler shabda haru hataunu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'because' ra 'so' ko prayog ramrari garnu parcha.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and makes shopping quicker and easier. By writing things down, I can ensure that I don't forget any important items. This way, I save time and avoid unnecessary trips to the store.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma kehi spelling ra grammar ko galti chan jastai 'task' ko plural 'tasks' hunu parcha, 'add' ko thau ma 'and' lekhnu parcha, ra 'definately' ko thau ma 'definitely' lekhnu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'for example' ramrari prayog garnu bhayeko cha, tara sentence haru lai thap spashta ra chhoto banau. Tapai le thap vivid vocabulary prayog garna saknu huncha.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties. Overall, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo galti chan. 'Making list' ko thau ma 'making lists' lekhnu parcha. 'Our writing it down' ko thau ma 'writing it down' lekhnu parcha. 'For fill that' ko thau ma 'because' lekhnu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai chhoto, spashta ra logically jodne prayas garnu parcha.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and believe they can recall everything without writing it down. For example, they might think making lists is unnecessary because creating them takes too much time.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma sentence haru ramrari jodne linking words ko prayog thapnu parcha. 'So' ra 'And' jasto filler shabda haru hataunu parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau. Tapai le vivid vocabulary jastai 'notifications' (plural) ra 'focus better' ko prayog ramrari garnu parcha.

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I can easily get distracted by notifications on my phone. On paper, I can focus better and ensure that I don't forget any important items. Writing things down makes my work easier and faster.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I saw because it helps me stay organized an makes my sopping quicker and easier.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and makes my shopping quicker and easier.

The verb 'saw' is past tense and incorrect here; the sentence talks about a habitual action, so present tense 'shop' should be used. Also, 'an' should be 'and', and 'sopping' is a typo for 'shopping'.

× an makes my sopping quicker and easier.

✓ and makes my shopping quicker and easier.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to correctly connect the two clauses.

× By writing things down, I can ensure that I don't forget any important items. Uh. This way I can save my time and avoid unnecessary trip to this store.

✓ By writing things down, I can ensure that I don't forget any important items. Uh. This way I can save my time and avoid unnecessary trips to the store.

'Trip' should be plural 'trips' because it refers to multiple possible trips. Also, 'to this store' is better as 'to the store' for general reference.

× For example, by listing task in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently add avoid forgetting important duties.

✓ For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Also, 'add' is a typo and should be 'and'.

× Overall, making a list definately improve my productivity.

✓ Overall, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

'Definately' is a misspelling of 'definitely'. Also, 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with singular subject 'making a list'.

× Some people don't like making list because they trust their memory and they believe they can recall everything without our writing.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and they believe they can recall everything without writing.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural subject 'some people'. 'Our' is incorrect and should be removed.

× without our writing.

✓ without writing.

'Our' is an incorrect pronoun here; it should be omitted to make the phrase correct.

× It down. For example, they might consider making list is unnecessary for fill that creating them takes too much time, so they don't like.

✓ It down. For example, they might consider making lists unnecessary because creating them takes too much time, so they don't like it.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'making list' should be 'making lists'; 'for fill that' is incorrect and should be 'because'; 'so they don't like' should be 'so they don't like it' to complete the thought.

× making list is unnecessary

✓ making lists unnecessary

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with the context.

× I prefer to make a list on paper rather than phone because on phone I can easily get distracted by the notification, but on paper I can focus better and I can ensure that I don't forget any important items on the list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because on my phone I can easily get distracted by notifications, but on paper I can focus better and I can ensure that I don't forget any important items on the list.

Prepositions 'on' are missing before 'phone' and 'my' is needed to specify possession. 'Notification' should be plural 'notifications' as distractions are usually multiple.

× by the notification

✓ by notifications

'Notification' should be plural 'notifications' because distractions usually come from multiple notifications.