列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I have a good memory. However, if I need to buy many items, I prefer to make a list to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Make sure to complete your sentences and provide specific supporting details. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to show contrast and organise your ideas better.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work and studies when I have free time. However, sometimes my busy schedule prevents me from following them properly. Still, I want to improve because managing time effectively can help me be more productive.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use simpler sentences and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Instead, they prefer to use their mobile phones to note down items, which is more convenient and easy to access anytime.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because paper lists can be lost easily. With a phone, I can access my list anytime, which helps me remember what to buy and manage my shopping better.

× No, I didn't make a list when I show up as I remember everything when I go for shopping because I have very mental very well mental ability.

✓ No, I didn't make a list when I showed up as I remembered everything when I went shopping because I have very good mental ability.

The verbs 'show up' and 'remember' should be in the past tense 'showed up' and 'remembered' to match the past tense context indicated by 'didn't make'. Also, 'go for shopping' is corrected to 'went shopping' for natural past tense usage.

× because I have very mental very well mental ability.

✓ because I have very good mental ability.

The phrase 'very mental very well mental ability' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'very good mental ability' to correctly describe the quality of mental ability.

× That's why I didn't make any list for growing while going to shopping.

✓ That's why I didn't make any list for grocery shopping.

The phrase 'for growing while going to shopping' is incorrect. It should be 'for grocery shopping' to correctly express the purpose of the list.

× And the more over the list for shopping is not necessary when you are not having a many more items to purchase.

✓ Moreover, a shopping list is not necessary when you do not have many items to purchase.

The phrase 'a many more items' is incorrect. 'Many' should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'more over' should be 'Moreover' as a conjunctive adverb.

× But if you're having many more items then I will also make.

✓ But if I have many more items, then I will also make one.

The pronoun 'you're' (you are) is incorrect here; it should be 'I have' to match the speaker's perspective. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed 'one' to refer to 'a list'.

× Yes I make a list for my work as when I'm free I make a schedule for my studies and as well as former work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. When I'm free, I make a schedule for my studies as well as for my work.

The sentence was run-on and unclear. Breaking it into two sentences improves clarity. 'Former work' is incorrect; it should be 'for my work'.

× But it doesn't work any time because I am having very busy schedule that's why it doesn't even work anytime.

✓ But it doesn't work all the time because I have a very busy schedule; that's why it doesn't work anytime.

'Any time' should be 'all the time' to express frequency. Also, 'I am having' is incorrect here; 'I have' is the correct present tense form.

× But I want to make it work because it will be beneficial for me not for any other one.

✓ But I want to make it work because it will be beneficial for me, not for anyone else.

'Any other one' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'anyone else' to refer to other people.

× For example managing a time will give me many benefits like.

✓ For example, managing time will give me many benefits, such as...

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation. 'Managing a time' should be 'managing time'. The sentence should be completed or ended properly.

× Some people don't like to make less because they're not having much time to make a list as they are having mobile phones with them when they're going for shopping and then they will write all those things in their mobile phone and then can open it by anytime and to make up.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they don't have much time to make a list. They have mobile phones with them when they go shopping, and they write all those things in their phone, which they can open anytime to check.

'Make less' should be 'make lists'. 'They're not having' is incorrect; 'they don't have' is correct. 'Going for shopping' should be 'go shopping'. The sentence was run-on and unclear, so it was restructured for clarity.

× Review for them and take the things which they want, but if they make less it will be just a waste of time.

✓ They can review it and take the things they want, but if they make lists, it will be just a waste of time.

'Review for them' is unclear; it should be 'review it'. 'Make less' should be 'make lists'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes people will get lost from our hands and we will not see what we are going to purchase.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes people lose paper lists, and we cannot see what we are going to purchase.

'Get lost from our hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lose paper lists' or 'drop lists from our hands'.

× But if we're having a list in our mobile phone then we can open it by anytime and it may occur.

✓ But if we have a list on our mobile phone, then we can open it anytime, and it will be available.

'We're having' should be 'we have'. 'Open it by anytime' is incorrect; it should be 'open it anytime'. 'It may occur' is unclear; 'it will be available' is clearer.

× Again, a list about the foot to purchase and how to invest in that particular item at. Spencer.

✓ Again, a list helps to remember what to purchase and how to invest in that particular item at Spencer's.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Foot to purchase' is incorrect; it should be 'what to purchase'. 'At Spencer' likely refers to a store named Spencer's, so it should be 'at Spencer's'.