列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. Try to directly answer the question with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. For example, mention how making a list helps you shop efficiently and prevents forgetting items.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need. For instance, I use my phone to note down groceries, which makes shopping quicker and more organized.

建議: Your response is relevant but can be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you manage your tasks effectively.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks for the next day. By listing everything in advance, I can stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

建議: Your answer needs more clarity and better structure. Avoid vague phrases and try to give specific reasons with linking words. For example, explain that some people may find list-making time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally. Additionally, they might feel confident managing their work without writing things down.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains unnecessary repetition. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain why you prefer your phone with specific reasons and linking words to make your response coherent.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily add or remove items. Although I used to write lists on paper, using my phone now saves time and helps me stay organized.

× So I'll be making listing the phone.

✓ So I'll be making a list on the phone.

The phrase 'making listing' is incorrect because 'listing' is a noun here and needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'making a list' is the correct collocation. The preposition 'on' is used with 'phone' to indicate the device where the list is made.

× It's easy for me to remember what to get it from the shop or anything.

✓ It's easy for me to remember what to get from the shop or anything.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'what' already refers to the object to be gotten. Including 'it' causes redundancy and grammatical error.

× So I'll be making listing the phone. To remember what I had to get it from the shop.

✓ So I'll be making a list on the phone to remember what I have to get from the shop.

The phrase 'making listing' should be 'making a list'. Also, 'had to get' should be 'have to get' to match the present/future context. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'get'.

× So I'll be listing whatever have to do on my days.

✓ So I'll be listing whatever I have to do on my days.

The subject pronoun 'I' is missing before 'have to do'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical.

× And before that day, I'll be listing all those things.

✓ And before that day, I'll list all those things.

Using 'I'll be listing' (future continuous) is less appropriate here; simple future 'I'll list' is better to express the planned action before that day.

× Maybe it does because of their laziness, or they maybe they're good at doing their works.

✓ Maybe it is because of their laziness, or maybe they are good at doing their work.

'Does' is incorrect here; 'is' fits better with 'maybe it is because'. Also, 'works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun in this context. The phrase 'they maybe they're' is redundant; 'maybe they are' is correct.

× Some people will be like a lazy to do for the next day, so they're just not making.

✓ Some people are lazy to make a list for the next day, so they just don't make one.

'Like a lazy' is incorrect; 'are lazy' is the correct adjective usage. 'To do for the next day' is unclear; 'to make a list for the next day' is clearer. 'They're just not making' is incomplete; 'they just don't make one' is better.

× And at least, or maybe they don't have the time to do that.

✓ Or maybe they don't have the time to do that.

'And at least' is unnecessary and confusing here; removing it improves clarity.

× No, it is.

✓ No, I don't.

'No, it is' is incorrect as a response to preference. The correct response is 'No, I don't' to indicate not preferring paper.

× That is like easy for me to write it on the paper and go and get it from the shop.

✓ It was easy for me to write on paper and then go and get items from the shop.

'That is like easy' is informal and awkward; 'It was easy' is better. 'Write it on the paper' is incorrect; 'write on paper' is correct. 'Get it from the shop' is vague; 'get items from the shop' is clearer.

× Now it is we can. Write anything, whatever. We wanted it on phone so.

✓ Now we can write anything we want on the phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. Correcting to a clear sentence with proper pronouns and verb forms improves clarity.

× If you wanted to make a list also you can go for on the phone.

✓ If you want to make a list, you can also use the phone.

'Wanted' should be 'want' to match present tense. 'Go for on the phone' is incorrect; 'use the phone' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity.