列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang alami dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan langsung, serta hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan efektif.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget what I need to buy. It helps me remember everything and shop more efficiently.

建議: Jawaban Anda mengandung beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan kata. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan baik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran jawaban.

範例: Absolutely yes. As both an employee and a businessman, I always make a list of tasks I need to complete each day. This helps me stay disciplined and increases my productivity.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat banyak kesalahan pengucapan dan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memberikan alasan yang lebih spesifik dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they might feel lazy to do it. However, making lists can actually save time in the long run.

建議: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan kata dan struktur kalimat yang kurang tepat. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan kata yang sesuai untuk menjelaskan preferensi Anda.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. I can easily check what I have done and what still needs to be done anytime and anywhere.

× Because I always forgot that what I want to buy.

✓ Because I always forget what I want to buy.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used.

× So I usually list is that what I want to buy?

✓ So I usually make a list of what I want to buy.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a proper sentence structure to express the intended meaning.

× I always listing what what I must do in this day.

✓ I am always listing what I must do today.

The verb 'listing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'this day' is better expressed as 'today'.

× It's helped me to more discipline and also make me more productive in this day.

✓ It helps me to be more disciplined and also makes me more productive today.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and prepositions. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense, 'to more discipline' should be 'to be more disciplined', and 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject.

× I think some people don't like making laces BIC AWS.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it takes time.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words 'laces BIC AWS'. The correction replaces them with a meaningful phrase that fits the context.

× It was thing time and also there are still lazy to make a list.

✓ It wastes time and some people are still too lazy to make a list.

The phrase 'It was thing time' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'It wastes time' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'there are still lazy' is corrected to 'some people are still too lazy'.

× But I think. I'm not sure about that. We can do a lot of time.

✓ But I think I'm not sure about that. We can save a lot of time.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the first two sentences and clarifies the last sentence to express the intended meaning.

× I prefer necklace on my phone because it's more mobile.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient.

'Necklace' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'making lists'. Also, 'more mobile' is awkward; 'more convenient' fits better.

× I can check what I already do and what I never do so I can check it easily from my phone.

✓ I can check what I have already done and what I haven't done, so I can easily check it from my phone.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb tenses. Present perfect 'have done' and 'haven't done' are appropriate to describe completed or uncompleted tasks.